A Brother So Dear

My brother, abit bewildered that day,
to hear of his sisters engagement,
he nearly hit the pavement,
to give his very statement.

He did not like my perspective partner,
for a number of reasons I will answer,
he is not a nasty person, my brother,
in fact he is quite the opposite,
to which I will sit and explain.

The guilty doth stay,
to much array,
of staying in my mothers house,
while she is away.

He takes the biscuit,
to eat my mothers food,
when he is not in the mood,
to stomach it.

Too much beer lunch time you see,
sends you to sleep,
to forget all perspective,
of the reasons my brother fears for me.

He doesn't treat me right,
not giving me the respect I deserve,
to carry the nurse,
who could of been so badly hurt.

My brother so caring and protective,
to see I am respected,
and that I am fulfilled,
as a mother and parentee.

He gets his wish fulfilled,
as I am very happy and contented,
and have been given fulfillment,
as a great mother, sister, and daughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/28/2012 4:36:00 PM
This is very well written. I have five brothers. i love them all, but one is extra special. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 4/28/2012 5:05:00 PM
Thankyou Lucilla very much. Wow five brothers, how lovely. I bet they always protected their sister. Best wishes Amanda
Date: 4/28/2012 4:13:00 PM
Smile ˜ Its all about love right ˜ No matter what some may say and or think, Love, shall save the day * Smile, and beauty such as Yourself shall be the reason why ˜ Kudos to your precious brother ˜ My love to You, John!:) ˜
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Date: 4/28/2012 4:20:00 PM
Thankyou John this was written about 14 years ago, and I just found it and thought I would post it. Thankyou for your kind words Amanda
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