A Broken Man

When I see a homeless man on the street, I imagine myself there in his place. Wrapped in a blanket, on the cold concrete, a broken man who has fallen from grace: begs for coins as the tears run down his face. He's not garbage; he's a human being: that feels the same as you and me inside. Besides the obvious, you're not seeing his hurt: set your preconceptions aside, and grasp the shame of having lost one's pride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:07 PM
This is a thoughtful write. Congrats on your win.
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Richard, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, Emile.
Makama Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Just lovely to read. Its been a while I have been here and I am happy not to regret flipping through some lines of which yours are part of them... Great craft, lovely message.
Pinet Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Funom, your kind comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Wonderfully said Emile, true compassionate words...if only others would feel the same. The day is coming where homelessness will be a thing of the past!
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Thanks so much John, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, Emile.
Michael Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 12:59 PM
Nothing left only an empty shell of man....Nice write...
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 8:48 AM
It is good “to see” I like that you envision sitting in his place...did Jesus Christ not do the same? I encounter some of the homeless as I work at the library. We should count it joy to serve those who have lost their way, even with only a smile and to see them. Nicely done, Emile. Hugs...Kim
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Kim, you always bring a smile to my day with your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
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