A Broken Man

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When I see a homeless man on the street I imagine myself there in his place. Wrapped in a blanket, sleeping on concrete, a broken man who has fallen from grace; begging for coins as tears run down his face. He's not garbage; he's a human being; feeling the same as you and I inside. Besides the obvious, you're not seeing his hurt; set your preconceptions aside and grasp the shame of having lost one's pride.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/28/2019 1:07:00 PM

This is a thoughtful write. Congrats on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thanks Richard, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, Emile.

Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:48:00 PM

Just lovely to read. Its been a while I have been here and I am happy not to regret flipping through some lines of which yours are part of them... Great craft, lovely message.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2019 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Funom, your kind comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2019 2:05:00 PM

Wonderfully said Emile, true compassionate words...if only others would feel the same. The day is coming where homelessness will be a thing of the past!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2019 3:02:00 PM

Thanks so much John, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, Emile.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/26/2019 12:59:00 PM

Nothing left only an empty shell of man....Nice write...

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2019 3:01:00 PM

Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2019 8:48:00 AM

It is good “to see” I like that you envision sitting in his place...did Jesus Christ not do the same? I encounter some of the homeless as I work at the library. We should count it joy to serve those who have lost their way, even with only a smile and to see them. Nicely done, Emile. Hugs...Kim

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2019 9:05:00 AM

Thanks Kim, you always bring a smile to my day with your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.