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A Brighter Tomorrow

When lies and mistrust infect a relationship it falters, becomes weak, and eventually dies. The pain of its passing guides your thoughts, taking you to the brink of despair. A river of trickling tears slowly gathers in strength, as the hurt lingers within your broken heart. Though time is gentle, the hurt is real... And you struggle with feelings of helplessness, in the face of love lost. Sometimes... reality is non-responsive to the wishes and dreams that fills our sails. And when love slips into a lull the winds of hope fail to blow, and so you get stuck in yesterday's shadow, unable to see the light of a brighter tomorrow, shining just beyond today’s horizon. (Free Verse) (06/05/2020)

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Date: 3/5/2022 4:09:00 AM
Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/5/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/3/2022 5:33:00 AM
Forgive, Forget and Full Force Forward. We cannot control the actions and words of others, we can get bogged down or we can learn from it and move on. Thought filled piece, Emile. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/3/2022 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, Reason, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/17/2020 1:58:00 AM
"love slips in to a lull" and "yesterday's shadow unable to see the light"....gorgeously blended lines Emile. Congratulations on your win :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/17/2020 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/15/2020 9:45:00 AM
This is a great write Emile, congrats on getting a win this time!
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Date: 6/15/2020 10:13:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/6/2020 1:11:00 AM
Wow, that's how I feel at times. Stuck in a shadow, however my shadow is of long ago. Very glad to read. Linda
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/6/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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