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A Brief Encounter

He sneaked his way into the Lecture Hall like a thief, His greetings were brief, Glancing around the room with a friendly smile, he then rested a long gaze upon her face, She felt uneasy and thought he might be in the wrong place. A while later, he boldly slipped a note into her hand, with a one-eyed wink, Reading it made her cheeks turn rosy pink, She dashed to the water cooler and took a long drink, Her brain froze, and for a moment she couldn’t think. To her surprise.they were paired together, and now sat staring at each other; neither spoke, and neither looked away, Fate’s fire ignited and was ablaze, In a world of their own, their eyes locked in a silent gaze, It seemed Destiny was at play, ensuring them that today was their day. In the hush of that moment, the hearts of a naive teenager and the cool-as-ice young stranger entwined, And as they parted and joined the flowing tide, Embedded in their memories, the magic of their brief encounter will forever reside. By Zyrool

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Date: 2/18/2025 10:39:00 AM
An brief encounter remembered always…great write Zyrool….Debx
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/18/2025 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and your lovely comment, Deb.Means a lot. Sending Blessings your way my new friend. Enjoy your day/ evening.X
Date: 11/26/2024 7:32:00 PM
Sparks of love were ignited in two pairs of eyes. Such teenage romantic moments are quite plausible. Though it happened to be a brief encounter, it will be etched deep in the core of their hearts for long. Love the way you allowed the spark of emotion to grow into a 'conflagration'.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/14/2025 12:38:00 AM
Hello Valsa, thank you for this beautiful comment. I sincerely apologise for not responding sooner/ probably missed the notification. But as the old saying goes, better late than never. Thank you, Thank you so much. Sending blessings your way.
Date: 11/25/2024 7:45:00 AM
Nice to have those moments in time when two people connect on a deeper level even nothing ever comes of it. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/25/2024 7:52:00 AM
Yes it is, Sara. Thank you for the read. Enjoy your day.
Date: 11/14/2024 8:33:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem which has a very innovative rhyme style and interesting story. It leaves me anticipating a possible future romance once the underage lady is grown. Your poem shows superb talent.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/14/2024 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words, Hilda. They have lifted my spirits up. Have a great day and wonderful weekend, my dear friend.
Date: 11/13/2024 11:13:00 AM
Lovely Zyrool, some moments in time stay forever in one’s mind… Beryl
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/13/2024 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Beryl. Much appreciated. I agree some moments never leaves you. Stay Blessed my friend.
Date: 11/13/2024 10:40:00 AM
Zyrool, I liked the rhymes and reading about the sparks flying between those two young people!
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/13/2024 1:16:00 PM
Hello David, glad you liked my efforts, means a lot. Thank you so much. Stay Blessed.
Date: 11/11/2024 2:43:00 PM
Hello Zylrool, Yes it was an infatuation for both of them. Infatuation does not last very long. it is not true love. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/12/2024 10:49:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, I will. A bright sunny day here and warm. I started my Christmas shopping. I still have to get a few things . Have a great day my friend. /Darlene/ Love.& Hugs.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/11/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for the read, Darlene, you’re so right. Have a great day my friend, love and hugs.
Date: 11/11/2024 5:46:00 AM
Nice bit of infatuation here Zy. Myriad possibilities
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/11/2024 8:25:00 AM
Hi Tom, thank you for your beautiful comment, it made my day. Wishing you a wonderful day and a great new week ahead, my friend.

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