A Brief Encounter


He sneaked his way into the Lecture 
Hall like a thief,
His greetings were brief,
Glancing around the room with a friendly 
smile, he then rested a long gaze upon 
her face,
She felt uneasy and thought he might
be in the wrong place.

A while later, he boldly slipped a note 
into her hand, with a one-eyed wink,
Reading it made her cheeks turn rosy 
pink,
She dashed to the water cooler and
took a long drink,
Her brain froze, and for a moment 
she couldn’t think.

To her surprise.they were paired 
together, and now sat staring at 
each other; neither spoke, and neither 
looked away,
Fate’s fire ignited and was ablaze,
In a world of their own, their eyes 
locked in a silent gaze, 
It seemed Destiny was at play, ensuring 
them that today was their day.

In the hush of that moment,
 the hearts of a naive teenager and 
the cool-as-ice young stranger 
entwined,
And as they parted and joined 
the flowing tide,
Embedded in their memories, 
the magic of their brief encounter 
will forever reside.


By Zyrool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Donnay Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 6:06 PM
What a great write.. we all have that one brief encounter with someone who can never be.. but your heart sees otherwise..
Gifford Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 1:37 AM
Thank you so much for the read and your kind words, Jennifer. Means a lot. Have a wonderful day my friend.
M  Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 10:39 AM
An brief encounter remembered always…great write Zyrool….Debx
Gifford Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and your lovely comment, Deb.Means a lot. Sending Blessings your way my new friend. Enjoy your day/ evening.X
George Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Sparks of love were ignited in two pairs of eyes. Such teenage romantic moments are quite plausible. Though it happened to be a brief encounter, it will be etched deep in the core of their hearts for long. Love the way you allowed the spark of emotion to grow into a 'conflagration'.
Gifford Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 12:38 AM
Hello Valsa, thank you for this beautiful comment. I sincerely apologise for not responding sooner/ probably missed the notification. But as the old saying goes, better late than never. Thank you, Thank you so much. Sending blessings your way.
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Nice to have those moments in time when two people connect on a deeper level even nothing ever comes of it. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Gifford Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Yes it is, Sara. Thank you for the read. Enjoy your day.
Greenhough Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:33 AM
I enjoyed this poem which has a very innovative rhyme style and interesting story. It leaves me anticipating a possible future romance once the underage lady is grown. Your poem shows superb talent.
Gifford Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 9:03 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words, Hilda. They have lifted my spirits up. Have a great day and wonderful weekend, my dear friend.
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November 13, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Lovely Zyrool, some moments in time stay forever in one’s mind… Beryl
Gifford Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Beryl. Much appreciated. I agree some moments never leaves you. Stay Blessed my friend.
Crandall Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Zyrool, I liked the rhymes and reading about the sparks flying between those two young people!
Gifford Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Hello David, glad you liked my efforts, means a lot. Thank you so much. Stay Blessed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 2:43 PM
Hello Zylrool, Yes it was an infatuation for both of them. Infatuation does not last very long. it is not true love. Hugs. /Darlene/
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November 12, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Hello Zyrool, I will. A bright sunny day here and warm. I started my Christmas shopping. I still have to get a few things . Have a great day my friend. /Darlene/ Love.& Hugs.
Gifford Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:59 PM
Thank you for the read, Darlene, you’re so right. Have a great day my friend, love and hugs.
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