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A Brief Case Exchange

The spiral staircase made her high heels sing as quickly she descended to ground floor. She’d pulled it off! Her briefcase held the proof. How proud of her would be her paramour! How carefully they’d planned the pefect heist. He’d groomed her well in all she had to do. She’d faked credentials and gained trust in them. Then precious relics she had access to. From here, the City Churches pierced the mist where they would meet. Her man made no mistakes. She’d take a case identical from him, return to the museum with the fakes! While making the exchange, she nervously had dropped the case of relics! He was there to quickly stuff them back in their briefcase. He closed it, and now smiling, crossed the square. The fakes in hand, back to her job she ran, clueless that her man she’d not see again! June 6, 2018 for Viv Wigley's One Nine And Sixteen Upgrade Version Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/24/2018 5:27:00 AM
The dirty double-crosser....good take on the words. I have been out gardening all week. Still chasing my elusive Muse. Congrats on your winning poem. SuZ
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Date: 6/22/2018 9:29:00 AM
Great story telling, Andrea. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/22/2018 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:41:00 AM
DUPED!!! nice little story Andrea. A quite interesting take on the three line theme.
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Date: 6/20/2018 11:10:00 PM
Back with congratulations Andrea. Tom
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Date: 6/20/2018 11:10:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea, on your double dealing duplicitous entry. Viv x
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Date: 6/11/2018 3:41:00 PM
Is love that blind? ...or was she a blonde, Andrea? :) Or had she played a double game, prepared her own fakes, and passed those to her accomplice! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/10/2018 5:54:00 PM
Oh, what a horrible man. What love can make one do. And this would make a wonderful movie.
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Date: 6/8/2018 4:35:00 PM
Good luck Andrea with this intriguing poem..
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:48:00 AM
I love it that he is such a snake she has no clue; a warning to others. Nice!
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:27:00 AM
Ahh, this is a really wonderful poem, full of imaginations and finally the twist in it, you have certainly written a great story by three compulsory lines, good luck in the contest, I expect it to do well in it.
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Date: 6/7/2018 5:17:00 PM
How wisely you filled in the prompts I made an attempt with the Blessed Tryst but no bites yet,
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:54:00 AM
Well written verse Andrea, it was like a scene from a film. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:25:00 AM
oh what a clever twist to the story and I love the word play in the title . Got to see this at the top Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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