A Bridge Over Troubled Waters

If this night you suddenly find
you have lost all faith in mankind,
need I say anymore, I care.
A resourceful comrade, I’ll be -a
friend in your dreadful green se-a.  

I'm willing to help guide your boat;
sailing wild, can we keep her afloat?
Right now, waves seem brutal, unfair,
behind us spite-filled ships bear down
like dead weights leaving us to drown.

A  quick look to heaven reveals
bridge of mercy for such ordeals.
Overwhelmed, I found when despair
troubled me, then I learned to tread
water - a sure hand ‘neath my head.

I know the pardon He can endow;
will faith in mankind help you now?
Ease into this slowly and share
your forgiveness with stormy souls.
Mind, you must give God the controls.


written 2/13/14 
Roy Jerden's word acrostic contest, judged 3/10/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Reason hi congrats on win hugs
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:39 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. reason
Harper Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Reason, I love the wonderful end to this poem about friendship, congratulations
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 7:48 PM
Great advice. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Poteet Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:25 PM
Thanks, Joyce, I enjoyed your entry, quite a similar message. Have a great day!
Jerden Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 6:42 PM
The bolding really makes the acrostic stand out. Excellent rendering of the theme and some very good rhyme and meter as well! Congratulations!
Poteet Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:14 PM
thank you so much, Roy for the privilege of a placement in your contest. I appreciate your encouragement.
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 9:44 PM
Another good one I am seeing here. Did you see Catie's? She also did the bold print at the front of each line. That takes a long time to do, doesn't it? Way to go with both message and presentation!!
Poteet Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 11:47 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I'm glad for your comment. I paste the code at the beginning of each line then highlight the first words, delete, and paste into the code. Takes some time, yes.
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