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A Bridge Over Troubled Waters

If this night you suddenly find you have lost all faith in mankind, need I say anymore, I care. A resourceful comrade, I’ll be -a friend in your dreadful green se-a. I'm willing to help guide your boat; sailing wild, can we keep her afloat? Right now, waves seem brutal, unfair, behind us spite-filled ships bear down like dead weights leaving us to drown. A quick look to heaven reveals bridge of mercy for such ordeals. Overwhelmed, I found when despair troubled me, then I learned to tread water - a sure hand ‘neath my head. I know the pardon He can endow; will faith in mankind help you now? Ease into this slowly and share your forgiveness with stormy souls. Mind, you must give God the controls. written 2/13/14 Roy Jerden's word acrostic contest, judged 3/10/14

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Date: 3/10/2014 10:24:00 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:21:00 AM
Reason hi congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:39:00 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. reason
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:49:00 PM
Reason, I love the wonderful end to this poem about friendship, congratulations
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:48:00 PM
Great advice. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:25:00 PM
Thanks, Joyce, I enjoyed your entry, quite a similar message. Have a great day!
Date: 3/9/2014 6:42:00 PM
The bolding really makes the acrostic stand out. Excellent rendering of the theme and some very good rhyme and meter as well! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:14:00 PM
thank you so much, Roy for the privilege of a placement in your contest. I appreciate your encouragement.
Date: 2/18/2014 9:44:00 PM
Another good one I am seeing here. Did you see Catie's? She also did the bold print at the front of each line. That takes a long time to do, doesn't it? Way to go with both message and presentation!!
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Date: 2/19/2014 11:47:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I'm glad for your comment. I paste the code at the beginning of each line then highlight the first words, delete, and paste into the code. Takes some time, yes.

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