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A Breath of Life

A breath of life Your touch is that of angel’s wing so soft upon my skin Like feathers sifting morning air as dawn does soon begin Pure beauty blooms within your eyes a warm horizon stare In marigold and baby’s breath and glistened dew drop glare A smile to make the sunrise blush, light fuchsia tinted hues Upon an early wayward cloud and skies of vibrant blues As in your scent, a breath of life my heartbeat sings your praise A whispered wish, with you to share these wondrous springtime days Good morning Soupers

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John Hamilton

Date: 5/1/2017 8:01:00 PM

Love the title, loved every word, beauty blooms within your eyes, sooo romantic, but that is what you do, and we never get tired of these beauties!

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 10:08:00 AM

Thanks so very much John. I am happy you liked my romantic morning offering. :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/1/2017 1:16:00 PM

Hello Chris. This is exquisite. Honestly. Are you sure you aren't the energizer bunny that never runs out. You have many ways and more ways to say good morning or good night. Just allow me to say this is marvelous. You instill peace. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done and executed entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 1:31:00 PM

I don't think so, my ears aren't that big, they are big, just not that big. :) Thank you my friend. I appreciate your visits and all of the nice things you say to me.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/1/2017 12:51:00 PM

I anticipated seeing your work this Monday and this is so worth the wait. Beautiful, vivid and flowing in the style I enjoy the best !! 7+

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 1:03:00 PM

Aw, thank you Lenna. What a very nice thing to say. I appreciate you always bringing a smile to my face. Thank you again my friend, it means a lot. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much.

Alexandra Mas

Date: 5/1/2017 11:02:00 AM

Wow. I love the piece. Thank you for sharing. So smooth and full of beautiful imagery.

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 11:40:00 AM

Thank you so very much Alexandra.

Sheila Sacks

Date: 5/1/2017 10:45:00 AM

Such a celebration of the senses! You have captured Spring with all its beauty and gorgeous scents so delicately! I love it! May Life always flower beneath your feet, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:51:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sheila, what a nice thing to say. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Elaine George

Date: 5/1/2017 9:40:00 AM

Beautiful and so uplifting. Truly a breath of Springtime! You are a very gifted poet, Chris. Elaine

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so very much Elaine. What a nice thing to say to me.

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/1/2017 9:36:00 AM

A good morning read. Some beautiful imagery you penned, has me smiled and appreciated the breath of life :) Hugs — Kina

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:05:00 AM

I am happy this one made you smile my friend. Thank you for your kindness.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/1/2017 9:35:00 AM

Good morning Chris, What a spectacular sight to wake up to. "Your touch is that of angel's wing." Created amazing imagery. Well done my friend. A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:04:00 AM

Good morning Alexis. :) Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Joseph Soper

Date: 5/1/2017 8:43:00 AM

Great lines that flow perfectly. nicely done...

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph. I am glad you liked it.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/1/2017 8:35:00 AM

Who would not get up being cheerful when knows an angel like that is waiting by his bed side! A marvelous poem dear, Chris! A 7!

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:03:00 AM

Thank you o much for your kind thoughts my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2017 8:30:00 AM

- Good morning, Chris ... a soft and lovely "morning" poem :) - "A smile to make the sunrise blush" from // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:03:00 AM

Good morning Anne Lise. Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you stopped by this morning.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/1/2017 8:27:00 AM

As I turn to your page I am amazed once more at the pure breath of sunshine you grace us with every morning:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Anne Marie for it is your kind words that always bring me a sunny day.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/1/2017 8:13:00 AM

I'm picturing a flower child walking through a field with the sun shining and a smile upon her face...a lovely picture you paint

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:02:00 AM

Like that one on your shoulders in your avatar? :) Thanks so very much Tim.

Darren White

Date: 5/1/2017 7:18:00 AM

Chris! So glad you're back :) I always miss the romantic poet very much during the weekend.... Beautiful poem my friend, I wish you a wonderful, sunny spring

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren I appreciate your visits.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/1/2017 6:48:00 AM

Wow, Chris your 'breath of life' has taken mine away. In one word -Brilliant. A Super 7+++

Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend for your kind thoughts