Chris Green Poet Rhyme

A Breath of Life

A breath of life 

Your touch is that of angel’s wing
so soft upon my skin
Like feathers sifting morning air
as dawn does soon begin

Pure beauty blooms within your eyes
a warm horizon stare
In marigold and baby’s breath
and glistened dew drop glare

A smile to make the sunrise blush,
light fuchsia tinted hues
Upon an early wayward cloud
and skies of vibrant blues

As in your scent, a breath of life
my heartbeat sings your praise
A whispered wish, with you to share
these wondrous springtime days

Good morning Soupers

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John Hamilton May 1, 2017 at 8:01 PM Love the title, loved every word, beauty blooms within your eyes, sooo romantic, but that is what you do, and we never get tired of these beauties! Chris Green May 2, 2017 at 10:08 AM Thanks so very much John. I am happy you liked my romantic morning offering. :)

Lisa Ricci May 1, 2017 at 1:16 PM Hello Chris. This is exquisite. Honestly. Are you sure you aren't the energizer bunny that never runs out. You have many ways and more ways to say good morning or good night. Just allow me to say this is marvelous. You instill peace. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done and executed entirely. Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 1:31 PM I don't think so, my ears aren't that big, they are big, just not that big. :) Thank you my friend. I appreciate your visits and all of the nice things you say to me.

Lenna Walker May 1, 2017 at 12:51 PM I anticipated seeing your work this Monday and this is so worth the wait. Beautiful, vivid and flowing in the style I enjoy the best !! 7+ Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 1:03 PM Aw, thank you Lenna. What a very nice thing to say. I appreciate you always bringing a smile to my face. Thank you again my friend, it means a lot. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much.

Alexandra Mas May 1, 2017 at 11:02 AM Wow. I love the piece. Thank you for sharing. So smooth and full of beautiful imagery. Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 11:40 AM Thank you so very much Alexandra.

Sheila Sacks May 1, 2017 at 10:45 AM Such a celebration of the senses! You have captured Spring with all its beauty and gorgeous scents so delicately! I love it! May Life always flower beneath your feet, Chris! Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:51 AM Thank you so very much Sheila, what a nice thing to say. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Elaine George May 1, 2017 at 9:40 AM Beautiful and so uplifting. Truly a breath of Springtime! You are a very gifted poet, Chris. Elaine Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:05 AM Thank you so very much Elaine. What a nice thing to say to me.

Akkina Downing May 1, 2017 at 9:36 AM A good morning read. Some beautiful imagery you penned, has me smiled and appreciated the breath of life :) Hugs — Kina Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:05 AM I am happy this one made you smile my friend. Thank you for your kindness.

Alexis Y. May 1, 2017 at 9:35 AM Good morning Chris, What a spectacular sight to wake up to. "Your touch is that of angel's wing." Created amazing imagery. Well done my friend. A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:04 AM Good morning Alexis. :) Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Joseph Soper May 1, 2017 at 8:43 AM Great lines that flow perfectly. nicely done... Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:04 AM Thanks so much Joseph. I am glad you liked it.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 1, 2017 at 8:35 AM Who would not get up being cheerful when knows an angel like that is waiting by his bed side! A marvelous poem dear, Chris! A 7! Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:03 AM Thank you o much for your kind thoughts my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2017 at 8:30 AM - Good morning, Chris ... a soft and lovely "morning" poem :) - "A smile to make the sunrise blush" from // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:03 AM Good morning Anne Lise. Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you stopped by this morning.

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 1, 2017 at 8:27 AM As I turn to your page I am amazed once more at the pure breath of sunshine you grace us with every morning:) Amitiés Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:02 AM Thank you Anne Marie for it is your kind words that always bring me a sunny day.

Tim Smith May 1, 2017 at 8:13 AM I'm picturing a flower child walking through a field with the sun shining and a smile upon her face...a lovely picture you paint Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:02 AM Like that one on your shoulders in your avatar? :) Thanks so very much Tim.

Darren White May 1, 2017 at 7:18 AM Chris! So glad you're back :) I always miss the romantic poet very much during the weekend.... Beautiful poem my friend, I wish you a wonderful, sunny spring Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:01 AM Thanks so very much Darren I appreciate your visits.

Maria Williams May 1, 2017 at 6:48 AM Wow, Chris your 'breath of life' has taken mine away. In one word -Brilliant. A Super 7+++ Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 10:01 AM Thank you so much my friend for your kind thoughts