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a breakup text to summer

This summer found men mortal

I’ll miss the better nature you find at the beach,
but goodness isn’t always a physical thing.

In the scene wherein we played,
—earlier this summer—
the sky was an azured theatre of taming heat
all colours seemingly washed too bright

and true to the ramping prophecies of science,
vital waterways shrank, and forests burned
with the devil’s own violence

Equal scales weigh though
both on the world’s beauty
and the miracles of men
though one’s a lower brand of perfection.

I know things of relative value when I see them, hold 
and feel them, like the indisputable metric of gold

While nature has sand and majestic suns,
men, as sovereign masters of base elements
invented air conditioning, and Fruity Pebbles.

Should summer be invited back next year?
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A song for this
the boys are back in town by thin lizzy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Parker Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 3:55 PM
Lines 6 & 7, poetry. 🌹 Generally, meh…
Vionet Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:23 PM
Thank you Ario. I'll take an honest review 🙃
Fallica Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 12:30 PM
Jeeze, you’re looking dangerous and formidable! / The air was filled with the scent of a thousand campfires and the sunsets were spectacular. . . No mention of pepperoni on pizza or uni sushi? / 💛
Vionet Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:44 PM
Dangerous and formidable? My, my 🙃 I like pizzas with everything except pineapple, mushrooms and anchovies - or stripped down to just plain cheese.
Conn Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 7:45 AM
- Must be something inside.
Vionet Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 10:59 AM
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