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A Brainstorm

I want my anger In the dark of the night it protects Nourishes Provides It is useful It keeps me wary Ripe Watchful Without it I will crumble And be reduced to smallness softness sadness I need my anger It makes me a woman Feral Untamed Fierce Anger faces unflinching what Would reduce me to a girl innocent vulnerable invisible And isn't that what he wants That thing that makes him feel Hungry Forcible So I keep my anger Close to my chest Burning Expectant For the day I will let it fly Searing Straight Extinguishing at last the monster Living inside. Brainstorm Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton 10.18.18 Placement: 2nd

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Date: 11/4/2018 10:06:00 PM
wonderful poem/// burning feelings
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Date: 11/4/2018 1:45:00 PM
Love this, amazing!
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Date: 10/28/2018 6:13:00 AM
While you are holding back, you are not holding back with this poem, wich expresses your brain storm well. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 10/26/2018 3:17:00 AM
- Strong feelings in this storm, Jordan :) Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jordan Marks
Date: 10/26/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/25/2018 8:12:00 PM
I’m back to say congratulations!! I knew this would place highly in the contest. Well deserved win. My best. Deb
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Date: 10/25/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Deb! I’m so grateful for all the positive feedback, on my very first submission! Means a lot :)
Date: 10/25/2018 12:52:00 PM
This is one of my faves from this contest, well done Jordan, you have an amazing way with words!! Congrats on a great win!
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Jordan Marks
Date: 10/25/2018 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, that means a great deal! Such an intriguing contest! Thank you again :)
Date: 10/19/2018 11:51:00 AM
This is a powerful piece of writing. You have said so much in such brevity. Well done. Best wishes. Deb
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Jordan Marks
Date: 10/19/2018 3:12:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much! Very much appreciated!

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