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A Boy's Own Hero

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Dad is long gone now - nearly twenty years.
I still see his face with the deep lines etched
at the corners of his mouth from the beers
he’d consumed with smacking lips - beer I’d fetched
home in a jug from the pub. Dad appears
the way he was before the day he retched,
puked, and lay back in his reclining chair
the cushion crushing flat his steel-grey hair.

Dad never got up from that chair again.
His body shriveled like an old apple
left lying on the ground in sun and rain.
He died within a week. At the chapel,
unknown mourners said, “He’s been spared the pain,
Thank God.” But we remained, left to grapple
with grief at the dimming of those bright eyes
hearts heavy as we said our last goodbyes.

But life does go on, pain passes. I see 
Dad in my mind’s eye still - giving pleasure -
sipping from his pint pot of sugared tea
telling tales of finding buried treasure
on ghostly wrecks in the Sargasso Sea,
battling giant squids for good measure.
A boy’s own hero fearless, strong and proud
by all life’s terrors and, in death, unbowed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/31/2020 7:15:00 AM
Phenomenal piece of writing. Truly good in every way.
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Date: 4/25/2018 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful tribute. Hang on to those memories.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:40:00 AM
A most endearing poem with great rhymes. I particularly love the last stanza. Congrats on your well deserved bronze metal, Alexander.
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:00:00 PM
I love your poem it was beautiful and I felt every word from it. I am sorry about your lost..
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Date: 6/28/2017 10:50:00 AM
It is a fine tribute, Alexander:) I miss mine, too.
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Alexander Blackie
Date: 6/28/2017 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, I guess we were both lucky in the lottery of life?

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