A Boy's Own Hero

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My father was a working man of few words but of great character. He told me stories of heroes and heroism that will remain with me as long as I have a memory. Hopefully, this poem will make him a hero to others and give him a form of immortality.


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A Boy's Own Hero

Dad is long gone now - nearly twenty years. I still see his face with the deep lines etched At the corners of his mouth from the beers He’d consumed with smacking lips - beer I’d fetched Home in a jug from the pub. Dad appears The way he was before the day he retched, Puked, and lay back in his reclining chair The cushion crushing flat his steel-grey hair. Dad never got up from that chair again. His body shriveled like an old apple Left lying on the ground in sun and rain. He died within a week. At the chapel, Unknown mourners said “He’s been spared the pain, Thank God.” But we remained, left to grapple With grief at the dimming of those bright eyes Hearts heavy as we said our last goodbyes. But life does go on, pain passes. I see Dad in my mind’s eye still - giving pleasure - Sipping from his pint pot of sugared tea Telling tales of finding buried treasure On ghostly wrecks in the Sargasso Sea - Battling giant squids for good measure - A boy’s own hero fearless, strong and proud By all life’s terrors, and in death, unbowed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 12/3/2017 7:00:00 PM
I love your poem it was beautiful and I felt every word from it. I am sorry about your lost..
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Date: 6/30/2017 9:23:00 AM
The greatest thing a father can do, other than love his children, is to tell them stories to fire their imagination. Your poem is a grand tribute to your father. Although there is deep sadness your love and admiration shines through the pain. Thanks for sharing a little of your with us. You have memories to cherish.
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Date: 9/8/2017 6:00:00 AM
Dear Jonathan, sorry about the long delay in acknowledging your comment - caused by life interfering with poetry! I guess we are very lucky to have good memories of our fathers - many children don't. I, also, lost my Mum at a very early age and am still trying to write about it . Very Best Regards Aloex
Date: 6/28/2017 2:11:00 PM
Alexander, a great poem honoring your hero. My dad had a rare combination of strength and humility and I miss him too. Regards, g
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Alexander Blackie
Date: 9/8/2017 5:56:00 AM
George, sorry about the long delay in acknowledging your comment - caused by life interfering with poetry! Thank you very much for your kind words which are much appreciated. Very Best Regards Alex
Date: 6/28/2017 10:50:00 AM
It is a fine tribute, Alexander:) I miss mine, too.
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Date: 6/28/2017 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, I guess we were both lucky in the lottery of life?