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He lived on a beautiful, rural farm, back in fond, good old days of yore, With his parents and two brothers; like sun's going in and out the door. He had always adored the color blue, so he had been nicknamed that. At eight years old, he was youngest; and as frolicsome as an acrobat! Blue did daily chores on the farm, like diligent nature's green chores; From dyeing skies various hues, to sweeping petals off emerald floors. Though fond of fanciful daydreaming, Blue yet found the time for fun, With friends, before a mulberry day faded, sulkily taking sangria sun. Fall feigned fading life with feeling, and fruit trees wept fuchsia tears; When faraway family came to visit, in flattered, scarlet, flower years. Blue lived in the house of the blues, only gleeful blues, instead of sad; For his room was painted shades of it, like some of the clothes he had. The shaggy donkeys and sauntering horses, were the common sights; Upon a starry, red sunset street, beside their farm of silver moonlight. Nice weather necessitated neighborly visits, like nature needing green; And making never-dying spring and summer, in gold nugget like sheen. Easter egg plants were baffling hens, in the season of butterfly blooms, Gracefully flying atop slender stems, to create magic, in gilt afternoons! Tiger eye pansies were always watching, in the middle of obsidian night; And candelabra blooms lit up gardens, to cast dusk in soft, romantic light. One day Blue drifted off to sleep, watching puffy clouds cross blue sky; And while he dreamed, he was smiling, like lazy summer's orange sigh. Now, the schoolmaster came, to say there'd be no school the next day, As administrative business was done Friday; like ruby birds flying away. Blue was absent from his chores, so the teacher helped to look for him. He espied him under a haystack, smiling unawares, as is nature's whim. 'Little Boy Boy Blue, come blow your horn,' called out the stern teacher. 'The sheep's in the meadow. The cow's in the corn,' said he to dreamer. 'Where is the boy who looks after the sheep?' cried a puzzled farm hand. 'He's under the haystack, fast asleep,' replied Teacher, in gold sun, grand. 'Will you wake him?' queried the farm hand, vexed as windswept blooms. 'No, not I,' said Teacher, noting blissful looks, sweet dreams often assume. 'For if I do, he's sure to cry,' he said, creeping off, like tangerine afternoon, Gazing back yet again, to revere the sight, like song skies, turning maroon.

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Date: 5/31/2024 4:20:00 AM
wonderful story, this color is like a revelaton in this poem, quite interesting and hypnotizing yan
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Date: 5/30/2024 12:03:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story with a great ending. I had a friend that loved purple. She wore only purple, house & car purple/everything. Enjoy Your Day Writing Away..........
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/30/2024 9:03:00 PM
I'll bet your friend's home looked lovely at twilight time. It's no wonder that purple was once so favored by royalty. Thank you for your gracious remarks.
Date: 5/30/2024 10:37:00 AM
Evelyn, i love your poem as i also work with words from old nursery rhymes. It was really a pleasure to read. I Hope you are keeping well as it has been some time since we have touched base with each others poems. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/30/2024 8:46:00 PM
It's very nice to hear from you, Jennifer. Thank you so much for the joy your words bring. hugs xx
Date: 5/26/2024 7:28:00 PM
Again, a very excellent play of words on an old nursery rhyme. I enjoyed this fantasy poem.
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Date: 5/26/2024 7:52:00 PM
So thrilled by your expressions of enjoyment, dear Hilda. Thank you very much. I hope your week is nice.
Date: 5/26/2024 3:16:00 AM
Wow, Evelyn! I love the storytelling here. A wonderful pace and interpretation of a character! Applause and cheers……..sally
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/26/2024 7:45:00 PM
Thank you for your gracious words and the pleasure of reading them, Sally. Have a wonderful week. :)
Date: 5/25/2024 12:16:00 PM
Dear Judy, your poem is a wonderful captivating journey through the idyllic countryside and heartfelt nostalgia. I loved how the whimsical tale of Blue and his adventures on the farm evokes a sense of warmth and tranquility, like a cherished memory from days gone by. I also loved how your lyrical language and playful rhymes transport me the reader to a simpler time, where nature and imagination intertwine. Such a delightful piece of storytelling. Blessings my Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/25/2024 6:16:00 PM
I am happy that you felt transported by this poem, Daniel. Your gracious compliments are very appreciated.
Date: 5/25/2024 10:34:00 AM
I love how your poem is a delightful and evocative portrayal of childhood on a rural farm, enriched with vibrant imagery and whimsical charm. Through its use of rhyming couplets, personification, and vivid descriptions, it captures the innocence, imagination, and beauty of a bygone era. The subtle integration of the "Little Boy Blue" nursery rhyme adds a layer of familiarity and timelessness, making it both a unique and endearing piece. The poem’s gentle humour and warm tone leave the reader with a sense of joy and nostalgia, celebrating the simple pleasures of life and the enduring magic of childhood dreams.
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Date: 5/25/2024 5:09:00 AM
Another superb depiction narrating the story of the boy who loved blue--in splendid descriptions, as always, Evelyn. Here is one example: One day Blue drifted off to sleep, watching puffy clouds cross blue sky; And while he dreamed, he was smiling, like lazy summer's orange sigh---And so many more. A FAVE!
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:46:00 AM
I love your use of colors and adjectives throughout this, giving a very artistic view of your storytelling thats flows with such creative imagery dear evelyn! You always leave me in awe! Impressive! Blue sounds like a smart and strong one! Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always. A fave it is for me
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:41:00 AM
Lovely poem. Loved the nursery rhyme you included in your poem. A delight to read, great rhymes and alliteration.
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