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A Boy Lost In Thought

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2023 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations on this winner. I have to say that it is an excellent one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/3/2023 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Edward. Your poem is beyond imagination in form and words.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/3/2023 1:37:00 AM

Wow! What a shape and poem, Edward, congratulations:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/3/2023 5:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo:-)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/2/2023 11:38:00 PM

Amazing Edward. ( Stupid me was looking for the poem) When I found it, it was well worth my search ! Brilliant, just loved it. Have never seen any submission that original.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/3/2023 5:04:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Wendy:-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/7/2022 10:11:00 AM

Utterly delightful and so ingenious Edward! Love it! Congratulations on your win. Love to see your creativity rewarded. Sending you blessings for the new year.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/7/2022 5:35:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-) Most obliged. New year blessings to you, too!

Valsa George

Date: 1/7/2022 12:55:00 AM

Ingenuity, thy name is Edward Ibeh ! Congrats !

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/7/2022 7:34:00 AM

Thank you very much, Valsa:-) Most appreciated.

Craig Bowden

Date: 1/6/2022 11:38:00 PM

This is by far the coolest post I’ve seen on the Soup so far. How long did that all take? So clever and creative. Congrats on your win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/7/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thank you very much, Craig:-) It took me about 4 or 5 days. Perhaps the toughest concrete poem I've ever done. One of my all-time favorite works also!

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/30/2020 12:44:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the content and form as well in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/30/2020 4:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Beata:-) Most obliged.

Elaine George

Date: 11/29/2020 8:53:00 PM

Wow! Now this is the way to do a masterful shape poem. SIMPLY AMAZING! Many congrats on your win, Edward. ~ Elaine

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/30/2020 4:37:00 AM

Thank you very much, Elaine:-) Your feedback means a lot to me!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2020 6:33:00 PM

wow, this is incredible, Edward. GREAT job and well deserved win. Congrats

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/30/2020 4:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea:-) So glad you loved it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2020 11:53:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. That is exactly how I feel sometimes when writing poetry. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/30/2020 4:39:00 AM

Thank you so so much, Sara:-) Most appreciated.