Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Bouquet of Words

I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you..
              I paint with my pen my feelings of love in colored words so true..
                 The letters are like seeds that extend from my mind to grow..
                     Each word a new flower that has bright colors that flow..                            
                   I hope to catch every aspect of my heart in arrangements
                                                of red, yellow and blue..
                   A warm bouquet of my everlasting love , it is my gift to you..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 25, 2011 at 6:13 PM a treasured poem .. a vibrant piece.. the Beatles are my most fav group of all time.. She Loves U and I Will...... says.. luv u forever and forever ..luv u with all my heart...luv u whenever we're together..luv u when we're apart.. say it loud so I can hear u ..make it easy to be near u..for the things u do endear me to u ..and u know I will.... breathing romance is a beautiful dance luv.. right now in limbo with talks... who knows where I will land luv.. J.G. leaning on shoulder now..

Jack Horne July 3, 2011 at 1:14 PM I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Michael : )

Carolyn Devonshire July 2, 2011 at 12:21 PM Words really are like seeds that flower into messages, Michael. A lovely bouquet you have given us here. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France July 1, 2011 at 3:03 PM Congratulations Michael on your win in my contest, you truly dipped your pen in the sublime~~

Carol Sunshine Brown July 1, 2011 at 10:16 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Writing in the Sublime" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta July 1, 2011 at 7:16 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance and thanks for my placement in your contest , Michael

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2011 at 12:33 AM bouquets for you in your amazing win, dear michael..:) huggs

Tahera Mannan June 30, 2011 at 10:38 PM Such a beautiful and amazing gift. many congrats for this win Michael.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 30, 2011 at 3:20 PM Congrats my White Knight on your amazing win in the contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. brilliant beyond all words written luv..your Jersey Girl in congrats mode just for u ..always and forever..

Elaine George June 30, 2011 at 2:53 PM Sublimely beautiful, Michael. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 26, 2011 at 4:20 PM simply lovely and romantic Michael.. Constance will goo over this entry for sure.. as I am luv.. good luck in the contest with this powerfully emotional write .. J.G. in bouquet of words mode ...oh..

Mourning Mist June 26, 2011 at 2:04 PM i am confused here it says everlasting, but you are calling atheist posts profound? i am confused? what is everlasting to you? Michael J. Falotico June 26, 2011 at 2:43 PM Everlasting love is for the lady the poem is about.. this is not about religion on any level.. Enjoy your day....Michael Michael J. Falotico June 26, 2011 at 2:19 PM If you continue to comment on all my poems questioning what I believe in based on a "profound" comment then my friend you are one click away from being blocked... bless you, thats how I was raised....

Carolyn Devonshire June 26, 2011 at 1:59 PM And what a special gift this is, Michael. Words from your heart make the best present. Hon, you know I've been struggling and I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate your support. Wish I could sit longer and comment more, but need to get well. Best wishes in the contest with this tender poem that touches my heart. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick June 26, 2011 at 1:00 PM I especially like the line that says "I hope to catch every aspect of my heart in arrangements"..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 26, 2011 at 11:56 AM What a very sweet and lovely write this is, Michael -- I really enjoyed how you used the line that Constance gave and incorporated it seamlessly in your write-- way to go :D and haha you made me laugh with your comments in my senryu-- oops! Sorry about your foggy eyeglasses ;) hugs your way :D

Wilma Neels June 26, 2011 at 11:53 AM Such a beautiful gift to share Michael.. Love this write of yours.. Had a laugh with that comment of yours about the sharks ;) love Wilma

Cory Long June 26, 2011 at 9:47 AM wow this was awesome hope you get a high spot in the contest with this fantastic write .cory

Renee Kelly June 26, 2011 at 8:46 AM Oh, this is beautiful!

Lisa Cooper June 26, 2011 at 8:46 AM wow what a way with words, this flows very nicely, thank you for your comment on my work~

Kash Poet June 26, 2011 at 8:43 AM Excellent write here Michael...liked it very much...best wishes.

Dinda Minardi June 26, 2011 at 6:27 AM Beautiful piece, Michael. Nothing more beautiful to be compared with poem than flower itself.. :)