A Bold Move

It was a bold move
To welcome the news the angel brought
That the long-awaited Messiah
Foretold by her nation's prophets
Would become incarnate
In the womb of her adolescent body
And through her
Be born into the world he loved
And longed to save

It was a bold move
Wearied and weakened in body
To make her way through the pressing crowd
Each vying for a better view
Of this man of oracle and miracle
Through the press of sweating bodies
The twist of dusty feet
She stretched her arm
And her hand touched his robe

It was a bold move
To enter the house
Where the men had gathered
Knowing that all eyes would fall on her
That her reputation would scream out
That she of all people was not fit
To touch such a person
Let alone pour her precious offering
Upon His feet
And wipe them with her hair

It was a bold move
To return to the garden alone
Searching for her beloved 
Whom she had seen die
Whom she had loved in life
And so recently loved in death
To view the now empty tomb
And ask if He had been taken away
Or where she might find Him

It was a bold move
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Locke Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:45 AM
what a lovely, very moving, poem. K
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February 17, 2010 at 3:51 AM
Thankyou all for your kind comments on my featured poem. A nice surprise, coinciding with the beginning of Lent.
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February 16, 2010 at 4:25 PM
They sure know how to pick out the really good poems here on the soup for the flavor of the week... Congrats...:JP]
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February 16, 2010 at 11:28 AM
congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. It was very moving and an enjoyable read.
Freeman Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your worthy poem feature, Anne! Sincere, Agape, Moses
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Excellent, thanks
Fraser Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Ann, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anne. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 12:01 PM
A lovely write in dedication to your faith Ann >> James
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 12:14 PM
She was special person because she loved him so. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 5:17 AM
Thankyou Anne for sharing your amazing writing with us . Love, Carol
Gass Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 5:03 PM
Excellent, faith filled piece, Anne. So well written and great expression! Love, Robin
Lacey Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:11 PM
God sure is an awesome God and so are the people that love Him and want a better life, good poem:)
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