A Bold Move

It was a bold move
To welcome the news the angel brought
That the long-awaited Messiah
Foretold by her nation's prophets
Would become incarnate
In the womb of her adolescent body
And through her
Be born into the world he loved
And longed to save

It was a bold move
Wearied and weakened in body
To make her way through the pressing crowd
Each vying for a better view
Of this man of oracle and miracle
Through the press of sweating bodies
The twist of dusty feet
She stretched her arm
And her hand touched his robe

It was a bold move
To enter the house
Where the men had gathered
Knowing that all eyes would fall on her
That her reputation would scream out
That she of all people was not fit
To touch such a person
Let alone pour her precious offering
Upon His feet
And wipe them with her hair

It was a bold move
To return to the garden alone
Searching for her beloved 
Whom she had seen die
Whom she had loved in life
And so recently loved in death
To view the now empty tomb
And ask if He had been taken away
Or where she might find Him

It was a bold move

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/19/2010 7:45:00 AM
what a lovely, very moving, poem. K
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:51:00 AM
Thankyou all for your kind comments on my featured poem. A nice surprise, coinciding with the beginning of Lent.
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:25:00 PM
They sure know how to pick out the really good poems here on the soup for the flavor of the week... Congrats...:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 11:28:00 AM
congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. It was very moving and an enjoyable read.
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Date: 2/16/2010 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your worthy poem feature, Anne! Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:10:00 AM
Excellent, thanks
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:55:00 PM
Ann, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anne. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 10/20/2009 12:01:00 PM
A lovely write in dedication to your faith Ann >> James
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:14:00 PM
She was special person because she loved him so. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:17:00 AM
Thankyou Anne for sharing your amazing writing with us . Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:03:00 PM
Excellent, faith filled piece, Anne. So well written and great expression! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:11:00 PM
God sure is an awesome God and so are the people that love Him and want a better life, good poem:)
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