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A Bold Move

It was a bold move To welcome the news the angel brought That the long-awaited Messiah Foretold by her nation's prophets Would become incarnate In the womb of her adolescent body And through her Be born into the world he loved And longed to save It was a bold move Wearied and weakened in body To make her way through the pressing crowd Each vying for a better view Of this man of oracle and miracle Through the press of sweating bodies The twist of dusty feet She stretched her arm And her hand touched his robe It was a bold move To enter the house Where the men had gathered Knowing that all eyes would fall on her That her reputation would scream out That she of all people was not fit To touch such a person Let alone pour her precious offering Upon His feet And wipe them with her hair It was a bold move To return to the garden alone Searching for her beloved Whom she had seen die Whom she had loved in life And so recently loved in death To view the now empty tomb And ask if He had been taken away Or where she might find Him It was a bold move

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/19/2010 7:45:00 AM
what a lovely, very moving, poem. K
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:51:00 AM
Thankyou all for your kind comments on my featured poem. A nice surprise, coinciding with the beginning of Lent.
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:25:00 PM
They sure know how to pick out the really good poems here on the soup for the flavor of the week... Congrats...:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 11:28:00 AM
congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. It was very moving and an enjoyable read.
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Date: 2/16/2010 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your worthy poem feature, Anne! Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:10:00 AM
Excellent, thanks
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:55:00 PM
Ann, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anne. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 10/20/2009 12:01:00 PM
A lovely write in dedication to your faith Ann >> James
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:14:00 PM
She was special person because she loved him so. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:17:00 AM
Thankyou Anne for sharing your amazing writing with us . Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:03:00 PM
Excellent, faith filled piece, Anne. So well written and great expression! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:11:00 PM
God sure is an awesome God and so are the people that love Him and want a better life, good poem:)
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