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A Blustery Cold Day

At dawn, when I wake my world is a winter wonderland blustery, gusty winds are blowing pure white snow into drifts cold, chilling and icy is the air in this lifeless world beyond my window down, deeper under my fuzzy blanket I sink even my kitty does not take a peak, but finally, we did get out of bed . . . getting a cup of coffee I gaze at my frozen view hopping on the window sill kitty tries to catch a snowflake clinging inside is so nice and cozy warm . . . just thinking of going out makes me shudder kissing me, kitty jumps down and runs away labyrinth paths in the park are buried deep magnificent, regal and sublime the trees have donned their white gowns nature knows how to create a landscape beautiful . . . over there, yonder is my car beneath that lump of white painfully, I realize that I am going to have to go out there into the cold questioning my sanity I put on my winter gear ready- I look like I am going on an Arctic expedition snow, pure white, heavy and blowing waits beyond my doorway trembling, I leave the safety of the house . . . unsympathetic, kitty watches from her warm window sill with a meow violent, a cruel wind almost blows me over, but, oh so whimsical the snowflakes dance fanciful all about . . . Xquisite is my view- yes, winter can be cruel and nasty but so magical too, yet I hate these zephyr wild snow storms . . . ________________________ February 9, 2020 Poetry/Abecedarian/A Blustery Cold Day Copyright Protected, ID 02-1224-398-09 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Abecedarian sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, NA, Judged 03/03/20 Submitted to the Standard contest, Best N-A Poems 2020 sponsor, John Hamilton, Judged 01/16/2021 Second Place

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Date: 1/16/2021 12:11:00 PM
This is quite the accomplishment Constance, hard to believe it got an N/A, well not this time! Thanks for your entry and congrats on a nice write and win!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2021 11:54:00 AM
John, thank so much for the contest and my opportunity to show this poem again, I never understood either why it did not place but now it HAS !!! _Constance
Date: 2/10/2020 5:20:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart … I find it hard to imagine how anyone can survive in conditions you painted with words so well. This is from someone who has only seen snow once, and had to travel thirty miles for that - thank you Dear Heart for your descriptive verse - Lindsay
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:16:00 PM
Lindsay, thanks for visiting and commenting, well, I am prove one can survive in these conditions, its all about having the right coat, snow pants, sweater, hat, scarf, mitts, thick socks, boots, well I think you get the idea, I am not talking about pretty filigree snowflakes, I am talking about SNOW, but we have beautiful summers although short _Constance
Date: 2/9/2020 6:22:00 PM
It was in the 60's here and now it is raining. My grass is already green and the buds on the trees are swollen. Spring will arrive here early again this year. It was fun reading about your snowstorm, Constance. What is it they say, "Pull down your pants and slide on the ice"
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:18:00 AM
Daniel, thanks for visiting, green grass? buds? Spring? Darn it another snowstorm today in my frozen corner of the world _Constance

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