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A Blue Rose Sings

Upon a deep blue rose, a scented song, so delicate of harmony and sweet; a melody, whose strains of love replete I mused upon. To whom could it belong? To claim such ballad ought have felt so wrong, but I could ne’er its memory delete; each note an echo in my own heart’s beat, alluring me to drift and sing along. Though how I wish I’d never found the rose whose music stirred a restlessness in me; where love once blossomed only sorrow grows from searching for a love that cannot be, and timelessly a tear-blue river flows through heartache’s vale to discontentment’s sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/29/2010 9:53:00 PM
A belated congrats on this beauty! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/26/2010 2:30:00 AM
Sharon. i definately feel like ive traveled through heartaches vale to discontmentments sea. like this a lot. thanks for the insightful write.- Fish.
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:14:00 PM
Sharon, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sharon. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:17:00 PM
Whoa love the poem haha :) congrats on your win!!!! Jaye Estre
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:44:00 AM
A beautiful Sonnet, congrats on your win. Caryl
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:48:00 PM
Congrats Sharon on your big win in the Blue Rose contest with this glorious write and win..enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on yoursinging rose. Lvoe, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on placing 6th in my contest. Your poetry does indeed sing.
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:18:00 AM
This beauty touched my heart Sharon.. Beautiful and sad.. going to my Favs..Celene
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Date: 6/17/2010 7:11:00 PM
Your first sonnet ? Wow, I am so impressed!
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Date: 6/17/2010 3:06:00 PM
A lovely sonnet and poem about a blue rose. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your comments on my "Making and Entrance". Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/17/2010 2:45:00 PM
Lovely title Sharon, and a lovely poem. It's amazing how many piece of poetry there is on the Soup about roses. Delightful read, glad you liked my Senyru's >> James
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Date: 6/16/2010 7:48:00 PM
Smile! "You Are Such A Tender & Beautiful Poetess" ~ "Such A Lovely Reflection of 'Your Priceless Soul I Believe, Dear Sharon Tideswell!!!'" ~ "Yes," is easy sometimes to get lost within the verses melodies of love another and, to somehow make them ones own....Smile, what an amazing You painted here--"What A Beautiful Blue Rose"--"My Love & Warmth to You Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear Lady," Bye!:) ~
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Date: 6/16/2010 11:13:00 AM
a symbol of love that causes anothers sadness. i can relate. i enjoyed reading your italian sonnet. i look forward to reading more of them. yours in writing....the sonnet man.
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Date: 6/16/2010 7:51:00 AM
This is excellent. Roses are so beautiful and full of fragrance. I also like the rhyming pattern in this poem. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:58:00 AM
You captured the soul essence of the "blue rose" Sharon. WEll done with your first Italian sonnet. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/16/2010 5:59:00 AM
A lovely write dedicated to roses, Sharon! Enjoyed reading your Italian Sonnet today. Thank you for your comments and have a nice day:)---Gert
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