Lukas Ficklin Poet Blitz

A Blitz Attempt

Someone into mood

Wave your flag
Wave it to someone
Someone in need
Someone will smile
Smile back
Smile for a while
While you sleep
While you work
Work a little each day
Work toward peace			
Peace with coexistence
Peace and gentle kindness
Kindness to yourself
Kindness to your pet
Pet the sand with your toes
Pet someone close
Close to you and me
Close to the Lord
Lord Have mercy
Lord this is long				
Long as in forever
Long you are
Are you still with me
Are we still doing this
This is tedious but
This I will finish for you
You are worth it
You deserve attention
Attention to detail
Attention and time			
Time is valuable
Time has a limit
Limit your barriers
Limit your excuse
Excuse yourself
Excuse those around
Around your world
Around your head
Head for growth
Head for change			
Change your perspective
Change your mind
Mind your manners
Mind the weather
Weather the storm
Weather the mood
Mood of all of it
Mood you made
Made;
It! :)

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Jan Allison June 7, 2016 at 2:28 PM Fabulous blitz I have never tried this form i think you blitzed it Lukas!:-) hugs jan xx7 Lukas Ficklin June 7, 2016 at 9:03 PM :) Thanks JAN! I was about to self diagnose ADHD halfway through lol. It is best free writing in the moment for me but not particularly my favorite.

Richard Lamoureux May 29, 2016 at 7:26 PM Thanks, I'm pleased you like it. Take care.

Richard Lamoureux May 28, 2016 at 1:19 AM Way to go! You rocked the Blitz!

Judy Ball May 27, 2016 at 4:29 PM This one really made me smile Lukas. It was humorous and a fun read with a good message to it. Very cleverly done. I like a poem that has a message and this said something. Nice job. A seven from me. God Bless, JB

Timothy Hicks May 27, 2016 at 11:14 AM This blitz had some character in it, with the sprinklings of humor in the middle: "Are we still doing this This is tedious" ... nicely done, Lukas! Blitz are very fun, in my opinion.