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A Black Bee On a Red Rose

A black bee on a red rose sucking honey with its pose flapping wings rest a while sticking sting having smile Yellow pollen tastes much flies to next give buzz night's food needs to pile living days life style For contest: Sponsored by Suz-D

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Don Johnson

Date: 7/5/2013 4:25:00 PM

Little bee is flapping well, watch him sting, pain him tell:) Momma here, father gone, he likes his tea black n strong, she almost 90 see, ole Johnson waits 4 she.... anon...

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/5/2013 7:49:00 PM

Yes, I caught my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/29/2013 7:14:00 PM

A black bee on a red rose. It is very beautiful Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/30/2013 9:29:00 AM

A lot of thanks for your visit and for beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun

Date: 6/29/2013 7:13:00 PM

A very beautiful & delightful poem which I've enjoyed to read this morning my dear friend bl. I love the feeling here making my morning very refreshing. Thank you so for sharing & your nice comment on my poem. Have a blessed weekend! love & hugs, Leonora

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/30/2013 9:28:00 AM

A lot of thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/29/2013 3:18:00 PM

Nice write. Just take the apostrophe out of "it's". No genitive case (not "it is" or "it has") exists there.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/30/2013 9:19:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for showing my silly mistake. I have rectified now. Again thanks for you visit to my page and for your comment, Loved always, bl