A Big Mac

On the road in hungry mode, 
Golden arches call! 
Stomach immensely howling, 
“Big Mac” has attacked.
Hamburger and cheese 
Zingy sauce to please, 
Gulp it down!
Plump!

Written 5/5/11 for Gwendolen Rix Fast Food Epulaeryu contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 6:25 AM
Yup, yup those days are long gone for me I used to love Burger Kings Whopper Juniors! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 2:19 AM
slurpy, slurpy dane! my best cheers for the shining win! :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 8:37 PM
funny final word, Dane Ann! VERY cleverly done, and congratulations.
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Congrats. Good job
Devonshire Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 2:31 PM
LOL The next time we go to a McDonald's, I want to see you eat a Big Mac -- hold the ice cream cone. Got a great laugh and I'm delighted to see you get a first-place win! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Many congrats on your number one spot win : )
Buckeridge Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Great last line, and a great win too. X
Richards Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 12:35 PM
Enjoyed this....especially that last word!!! So funny!! Congratulations, Dane Ann!
Poet Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Congrats Dane on your big win--enjoyed.
Phookan Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Congrats Dane on your well desreved 1st place win in this epulaeryu contest.superbly done...Love,gautami
Song Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 7:42 AM
I believe u were the sole entrant who expressed u were actually out driving around..the Golden Arches calling was clever usage of personification..it's as tho u had been possessed...first your stomach howled...then u were attacked....this was a fun read. Thanks for being a part of this contest, Dane Ann!
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