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A Better Tomorrow

A golden sun I yearn to see t'morrow That’s never, ever dawn in my life-time; The crows will caw with its first-ever glow, And wrens will timely chime a welcome rhyme. The sun will brightly dawn with healing rays And scorch forever to cease that Covid, beast, Who chokes our throats with his, malicious gaze, And furls the table, laid for ceaseless feast. Red-bills will bring the news of a vaccine, And hospital beds will lonely … bemoan; Young men will queue for delicious cuisine, And elders will break their bedridden zone. They all will coolly fly in festive air And dive in fleecy dreams with little care. That’s = that has Syllabic count: 10 syllables in each line. Rhyme scheme: ABAB; CDCD; EFEF, GG Sept. 30, 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(23) any theme any form Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 9/15/2020 3:07:00 PM
I do not have this attitude at all, especially regarding the dangerous vaccine they have in the works for us,but I am sure many cannot wait for it. This is an optimistic nicely written sonnet, just what he asked for!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/15/2020 4:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this immensely lovely comment!!
Date: 9/15/2020 6:04:00 AM
- I'm bad at English rhyming .... ABAB; CDCD; EFEF, GG ... or AACC; DDEW; KJ :))) - No one knows the day tomorrow ... but we must have faith that it will come ... a lovely poem, Newton :) - I hope this will be a winning poem for you, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/15/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this immensely lovely comment and your sincerest wish!!

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