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A Better Tomorrow

Neighborhoods burned. Riots laid them to waste The world is tense with racial dissension Judgement by color leaves an acrid taste But God offers hope through intervention He created us with skin, dark and fair No one has the right to question His plan We should ask for tolerance through prayer; and accede that we are the race of man On God, we should rely with faith and trust Because living in dread and constant fear will end with more hardships and a life trussed and shackled by things we should hold most dear We stand on the threshold of tomorrow ~ Better without prejudice and sorrow September 6th 2020 A Better Tomorrow Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 9/29/2020 4:54:00 AM
A well written poem Jenna! Congrats on your top win! Great job
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 4:25:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Mark.
Date: 9/28/2020 10:04:00 PM
Jenna, your outstanding sonnet points us to the only real hope. Until the day of true racial justice and equality, we will keep striving and praying and trusting in God. Going in my faves, congrats on a well deserved first place win, my friend ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 4:25:00 AM
He is our hope, John. Thanks so very much for your kind words.
Date: 9/28/2020 8:26:00 AM
Congrats Jenna on another top win in my contest, you seem to know somehow what I am looking for and always deliver!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 4:24:00 AM
I'm delighted with your comments as much as I am with your placement. Thank you, John.
Date: 9/28/2020 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Jenna! This is a lovely sentiment.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Date: 9/6/2020 10:13:00 AM
Best wishes to you Jenna. We have passed the tolerance level . Murder is OK now? Supported by lunatic newscasters. God never planned this...prejudice is compounded with killing. No law and order= the demise of any country. A being, called Satan and His minions are busy at work... Pangie xxx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 5:59:00 PM
The demon really is busy, but his reign will soon end. Thanks for so many of your comments...I'm appreciative of them and you.
Date: 9/6/2020 5:51:00 AM
we can all hope for a better tomorrow Jenna, your faith shines out my dear, good luck in the contest. i think this poem will appeal to the sponsor:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 6:03:00 AM
Hi, Jan. Thanks so much for being encouraging. We need more help since mankind is not capable of righting most of its own wrongs.
Date: 9/6/2020 5:44:00 AM
An excellent topic to address for this contest and you have a wonderful take on it. Nicely stated my friend. Best of luck. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 6:01:00 AM
Good morning, and thank you very much for your ongoing support, John.
Date: 9/6/2020 5:06:00 AM
Such a lovely write, dear friend. I wish you all the best for the contest. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 5:23:00 AM
Good morning and thank you very much for your kind thoughts, Gina. Have a great Sunday!

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