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A Better Tomorrow

Be with another rather than behold Sight of the blind gifted to everyone Absorbing action, instead of what we're told Big speech shrunk, replaced by worthy deeds done Closed eyed deep listening, imbibed intent Disregard for flair, sparkle, pomp, parade Blossomed from reward of firm message sent Path paved fearless by honest choices made Blind sight love allows hearts be truly read Respect earned according to fair virtue Judges awarding faith to soul thoughts said Trustworthy traits, all humans can pursue Purity speaks more loudly than the show Sightless tender touch, transparent hearts know 3rd September 2020 Submitted for Contest : A Better Tomorrow Sonnet Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 9/29/2020 4:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sigrid!
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Date: 9/28/2020 7:59:00 PM
Back to wish you congratulations, enjoyed re reading this!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/28/2020 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, beautiful Michelle
Date: 9/28/2020 12:13:00 PM
Some people talk the talk, but don't walk the walk, Sigrid. If we remain true to our convictions, hope blooms in our hearts. Congratulations on a great win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/28/2020 6:01:00 PM
That is so beautifully put, Carolyn. A difficult venture.... Thank you, poetry friend.
Date: 9/28/2020 8:30:00 AM
A wonderful write Sigrid, congrats on a top finish in my contest!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/28/2020 6:02:00 PM
Thanks. I appreciate it, John. Many brilliant sonnets you had to select from.
Date: 9/7/2020 3:18:00 PM
I love the theme of blind sight and virtuous hearts, inspiring for a more hope filled tomorrow!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/28/2020 6:00:00 PM
That's so good of you, Michelle. Congratulations on your Win. You know I'm a fan of it, beautiful work.
Date: 9/3/2020 7:21:00 AM
A intriguing and profound write, my friend. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/28/2020 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Regina

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