A Better Fate

Unrequited love haunts your fantasies and dreams. And you are left struggling; to stifle silent screams. All hearts crave affection; those denied die inside. And like a seductress, lust manipulates pride. Time warps reality; letting love drift off course. And salvageable dreams; get scuttled by remorse. Explanations fail the expectations of youth. But hidden behind tears; lies the elusive truth. You feel inadequate; unsure if you can cope. For: life is rife with fears that can overwhelm hope. Once stung by rejection; love oft morphs into hate. But, in time, you'll forget; and chase a better fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/12/2018 11:23:00 PM
Wonderful poem of the survival of hope, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2015 4:03:00 PM
Here's to all seekers of, "a better fate". Your words ring so true.
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:53:00 PM
Thanks, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 8:42:00 PM
Nicely written, Emile, and very emotional with words of wisdom and threads of hope woven through. Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2015 4:30:00 PM
Another poem filled with wise words -- only a well seasoned traveler of love know of these dangers . . . "in time" I like, for within these words . . . is holds hope . . . a better fate, a better life, a better love . . . the ability to chase the light. Nicely done dear friend. 7
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Date: 2/4/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thanks David, I am humbled by your praise. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 2:28:00 PM
Rejection is a strong happening to accept..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Sara, it's always nice to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 12:03:00 PM
This is lovely, Emile. You are a very wise man. It is not all that easy to do.
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, you've made my day. Emile.
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