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A Better Fate

Unrequited love haunts both fantasies and dreams. And you are left struggling to stifle silent screams. All hearts crave affection; those denied die inside. And like a seductress, lust manipulates pride. Hope warps reality, letting love drift off course. And salvageable dreams get scuttled by remorse. Explanations fail the expectations of youth. And yet, behind false smiles lies the elusive truth. You feel inadequate, unsure if you can cope. And break down into tears that oft overwhelm hope. When facing rejection, love can morph into hate. But, in time, you'll forget; and chase a better fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2018 11:23:00 PM
Wonderful poem of the survival of hope, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2015 4:03:00 PM
Here's to all seekers of, "a better fate". Your words ring so true.
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:53:00 PM
Thanks, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 8:42:00 PM
Nicely written, Emile, and very emotional with words of wisdom and threads of hope woven through. Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2015 4:30:00 PM
Another poem filled with wise words -- only a well seasoned traveler of love know of these dangers . . . "in time" I like, for within these words . . . is holds hope . . . a better fate, a better life, a better love . . . the ability to chase the light. Nicely done dear friend. 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/4/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thanks David, I am humbled by your praise. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 2:28:00 PM
Rejection is a strong happening to accept..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Sara, it's always nice to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 12:03:00 PM
This is lovely, Emile. You are a very wise man. It is not all that easy to do.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/4/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, you've made my day. Emile.

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