Home » Poems » Mystic Rose Rose » A Bedtime Haiku

A Bedtime Haiku

as my eyelids close I ask for God's protection then the dreams begin

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/3/2019 2:12:00 PM

A wonderfully warm and comforting Haiku. 'God is all around us and he is love'

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/21/2019 6:01:00 PM

That's a nice little bedtime ritual. Making me a little sleepy. I always welcome a dreamer. Love always, Laura

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/20/2019 7:07:00 PM

Gotta prove she is there for you, right? Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/20/2019 9:36:00 AM

sweet ink!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/20/2019 8:24:00 AM

Very nice! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/20/2019 7:23:00 AM

Happy dreams!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2019 6:01:00 AM

- Lovely written, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2019 2:53:00 AM

The best part of the day Pixie. Tom.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/19/2019 11:59:00 PM

Beautifully penned; we need protection from some dreams.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/19/2019 10:12:00 PM

Exactly right, my friend. Well done.