A Bed of Pink Petals

One April day when spring was in the air,
I stepped outside so I might relish it.
I came upon a cherry tree so fair,
beneath its limbs I was enticed to sit.

I fell to sleep inhaling fragrant bliss -
the vision of the tree still in my brain.
I dreamed one sweet, pink petal, like a kiss,
fell on my cheek, and soon there was a rain. . . 

A rain of lovely silken blossoms! Then
they softly made a pile upon the ground.
Warm wind embraced me; that’s the moment when 
I woke to pink resplendence all around!

Upon a bed of petals I then lay.
Inside a dream I had no need to stay!


For the Dreams poetry contest of Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haight Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Very 'dreamy' and well-written, Andrea. Congratulation on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Carber Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Lovely! Congrats, Andrea
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Lovely spin of the poem. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
May Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Love the ending Andrea...Congrats on your win..
Canerdy Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Beautiful, perfect sonnet, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Janice
Canerdy Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 7:53 AM
A 7 for this perfect, WINNING sonnet, Andrea. Congrats! Janice
Scars Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Andrea- beautiful sonnet for a lovely poetess :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
De Burca Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 6:27 PM
A beautiful poem congrats on your win
Merryman Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Lovely imagery, Andrea! I love cherry blossoms! Congrats on your win! Blessings.
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Beautiful dream drawn with beautiful imagination. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always my lovely smiling friend, bl
Canerdy Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Beautiful poem, Andrea--a 7. Janice
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Andrea, Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
A   Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:05 AM
This was nice Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Horsch Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 12:53 PM
This is such a good poem Andrea, You just keep pumping out the winners. Nice win...Hugs...Roger
Manassian Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Beautiful, as is all your work
A   Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:45 PM
nice win....PD
Gorelick Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:23 AM
What a lovely dream..just like you...congrats. BG
De Burca Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:13 AM
I get such a feeling of warmth and peace reading your wonderful poem. All so well depicted. Congrats on your win too.
Undertaker Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 9:20 AM
Andrea,my sincere thanks for your support. I thought only nette and Dr.Mehta are the big poets contributing and was little careless.Next time i would sit with some solid parameters to evaluate.Your poem is really great.I really enjoyed reading this poem.wonderful,awesome.(: ) Jenish.
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:22 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem nature, Congrats, Andrea
Babcock Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 4:46 PM
This is beautiful--wishing I was beneath a tree with buds on it. Snow is going fairly quick today as it is above 0 for a change. Spring is maybe on it's way. love phyl
Bateson Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Beautifully written.
Devnath  Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 1:45 AM
I missed to read this wonderful sonnet and congrats you on your win. Though it's late, I am giving now. Great congrats, my friend. Loved always, bl
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April 16, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Get a message for you in Debbie's blog. ~A.O
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