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A Beautiful Sunny Day - Poetic Devices

1. Today, the weather feels like heaven's bliss!
        	
  2. The balmy breeze and beautiful soft blue
      		
  3. of sky above so makes me think of love.
		
  4. I feel time's right to write a charming poem
			 
  5. alone, together with my thoughtful views;
		
  6. the day's bright glow morphs into sunny smiles
		
  7. as sun speaks out to tell me all's okay.
		
  8. Free gift, true fact, sun is my greatest joy!
		
  9. Oh loveliness of day you melt my heart!
			
10. The words are humming, coming to my mind...
		
11. not nasty, snippy ones, evoked by rain,
			
12. but sweet, melodious, soft, sing-song ones
		
13. that move what's seen to my poetic scene
			
14. to paint such happiness when weather's fine.
		
15. And now...my poem...profound or slight?  Oh no!
	
16. To write with pointless pencil...so pointless!


Poetic Devices Used In Lines 1 through 16:  Words in italics help identify them.
 
 1. Simile  2. Alliteration   3. Internal Rhyme  4. Homophone  5. Oxymoron

 6. Metaphor  7. Personification  8. Pleonasm  9. Euphony  10. Assonance
  
11. Dissonance  12. Parallelism  13. Homonyms  14.Truism  15. Antithesis 
 
16. Pun   Lines 10-14 Enjambment


August 18, 2018

~3rd Place~
Contest: Litany of Poetic Devices
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Judged: 09/13/2018

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Beautiful Scars Date: 9/14/2018 5:36:00 AM great job sweet Sandra :) I know this was a challenge you wrote it effortlessly. :)-luloo Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 9/14/2018 1:10:00 PM Thank you, Laura, for your very supportive comment. It was fun to work on! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier Date: 9/13/2018 2:47:00 PM Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Sandra. A lovely poem to read. Thanks for entering this challenging contest. Well done. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 9/14/2018 1:09:00 PM Thank you so much, Line. I enjoyed participating and appreciate my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Wendy Watson Date: 9/13/2018 1:51:00 PM So clever, Sandra. It must have been a time-consuming but very fulfilling challenge! Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 9/14/2018 1:08:00 PM Thank you very much, Wendy! It was challenging, but fun. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/19/2018 5:51:00 AM An EXCELLENT entry for the contest Sandra! I can't see anyone topping this amazing poem. I can tell you put some work into this gem and I truly hope it pays off! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 8/20/2018 4:23:00 PM Oh, thank you, Connie! I so much appreciate your very kind and supportive comments on this one! I hope it is what Line is looking for. I so much appreciate your visits! Hugs, Sandra