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A Beautiful Dream

Most beautiful dream, We were walking together, "Grabbing your arms tight, Looking for some place to sit, I felt it was so real…" "Can’t take off my eyes Your smile is so poisonous Deadly, I’m dying The cure is you, only you Woking up with hope again..."

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Louis Borgo

Date: 2/4/2017 4:14:00 PM

Well written poem 7, Louis.

Eiza Evangelista
Date: 2/4/2017 10:00:00 PM

^_^ thank you so much. ^_^

Phil Capitano

Date: 2/4/2017 8:36:00 AM

Sometimes love is the disease and not the cure. Very well done Eiza, keep writing and your dream will be revealed.

Eiza Evangelista
Date: 2/4/2017 9:59:00 PM

hehehe yeah, if you can't hold it, it will kill you instantly. Thanks a lot for taking time in reading my poem. Inspiring me to learn more.

Holly Bohto

Date: 2/4/2017 8:32:00 AM

I completely understand this write. Honesty is revealing. Honesty is everything in writing. Good job with this poem.

Eiza Evangelista
Date: 2/4/2017 9:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for appreciating my writes. ^^ It's boosting me to try and try to be a good one.