A Beautiful Dream

Most beautiful dream, 
We were walking together,
"Grabbing your arms tight,
Looking for some place to sit,
I felt it was so real…"

"Can’t take off my eyes
Your smile is so poisonous 
Deadly, I’m dying
The cure is you, only you
Woking up with hope again..."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/4/2017 4:14:00 PM
Well written poem 7, Louis.
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Eiza Evangelista
Date: 2/4/2017 10:00:00 PM
^_^ thank you so much. ^_^
Date: 2/4/2017 8:36:00 AM
Sometimes love is the disease and not the cure. Very well done Eiza, keep writing and your dream will be revealed.
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Eiza Evangelista
Date: 2/4/2017 9:59:00 PM
hehehe yeah, if you can't hold it, it will kill you instantly. Thanks a lot for taking time in reading my poem. Inspiring me to learn more.
Date: 2/4/2017 8:32:00 AM
I completely understand this write. Honesty is revealing. Honesty is everything in writing. Good job with this poem.
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Eiza Evangelista
Date: 2/4/2017 9:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for appreciating my writes. ^^ It's boosting me to try and try to be a good one.
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