A Beautiful Day Blows

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                 u                                                        g,
                f                                                        n
              i                                    y                   i
            t                       s           t                    s
         u                      w          n                    s
       a                      o          u                    e
     e                      l           o                     l
A b              day b          b              and b
Cold and furious, enough, sans closing doors.
Socks and sweatshirt with wind caressing. 
Acorns f            p                 the porch outdoors
              a            o
                l             u
                 l              n
                  i               d
                   n               i
                     g,             n
                                      g      

                               r,      
              t,                 e
             f                     t
           a                        n
          r                            i
The d         a precursor to W         invited in.
Regeneration of living space, aired out.
All before the Christian holidays, the t a i l s p i n
of  s        and i       also b          and b
      n               c           o                  l
        o               e,       u                e
          w                     n                s
                                 t                s
                               y                i
                                               n
                                             g.

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Date: 10/22/2023 4:47:00 PM
Airy delight in a shape poem, Kim. Your words and format wonderfully articulated the heart of autumn transitioning into winter! Just delightful. Congrats and high fives for your win. Blessings of autumn joy to you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 10/22/2023 3:07:00 AM
Creative one, Kim, congratulations:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna!
Date: 10/22/2023 12:10:00 AM
So awesome. Just amazed me. God bless you and Congrats with this fantastic poem. A work of art. Much love and blessings, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2023 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Gina! Blessings xx
Date: 10/21/2023 9:33:00 PM
Very clever and creative! Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2023 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 10/21/2023 2:30:00 PM
Creatively you have uniquely displayed the season/s. I enjoyed reading your work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/21/2023 6:32:00 AM
A very artistic poem dear Kim, I love the way you've presented it, intrigues me! A wonderful shape poem with excellent wordplay and beautifully blissful vibes.. Amazingly done!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya!
Date: 10/21/2023 2:49:00 AM
This is very creative Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Silent :)
Date: 10/20/2023 11:35:00 PM
What an amazing, creative poem Kim. Very impressed. Visually astounding and with a perfect title too. The poem has great impact. Love your choice of skilled words to create this stunning poem. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you for a perfect weekend xx :):)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Christina, for your wonderful comment. I appreciate you!
Date: 10/20/2023 11:24:00 PM
An inventive shape. You did well. Blessings xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/20/2023 1:19:00 PM
WOW!!! What a creative write/shape. Love It... Have a great weekend.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2023 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! xx
Date: 10/20/2023 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful design my friend. Your creative prowess shines in this poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2023 3:52:00 PM
I appreciate you, dear Vijay! :)
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