A Beautiful Day Blows

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                 u                                                        g,
                f                                                        n
              i                                    y                   i
            t                       s           t                    s
         u                      w          n                    s
       a                      o          u                    e
     e                      l           o                     l
A b              day b          b              and b
Cold and furious, enough, sans closing doors.
Socks and sweatshirt with wind caressing. 
Acorns f            p                 the porch outdoors
              a            o
                l             u
                 l              n
                  i               d
                   n               i
                     g,             n
                                      g      

                               r,      
              t,                 e
             f                     t
           a                        n
          r                            i
The d         a precursor to W         invited in.
Regeneration of living space, aired out.
All before the Christian holidays, the t a i l s p i n
of  s        and i       also b          and b
      n               c           o                  l
        o               e,       u                e
          w                     n                s
                                 t                s
                               y                i
                                               n
                                             g.
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Kauffman Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 4:47 PM
Airy delight in a shape poem, Kim. Your words and format wonderfully articulated the heart of autumn transitioning into winter! Just delightful. Congrats and high fives for your win. Blessings of autumn joy to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Creative one, Kim, congratulations:)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Thank you, Joanna!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:10 AM
So awesome. Just amazed me. God bless you and Congrats with this fantastic poem. A work of art. Much love and blessings, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Gina! Blessings xx
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Very clever and creative! Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Creatively you have uniquely displayed the season/s. I enjoyed reading your work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Sharma  Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 6:32 AM
A very artistic poem dear Kim, I love the way you've presented it, intrigues me! A wonderful shape poem with excellent wordplay and beautifully blissful vibes.. Amazingly done!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, Hiya!
One Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 2:49 AM
This is very creative Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Thank you, Silent :)
Bowring Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:35 PM
What an amazing, creative poem Kim. Very impressed. Visually astounding and with a perfect title too. The poem has great impact. Love your choice of skilled words to create this stunning poem. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you for a perfect weekend xx :):)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Christina, for your wonderful comment. I appreciate you!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:24 PM
An inventive shape. You did well. Blessings xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:19 PM
WOW!!! What a creative write/shape. Love It... Have a great weekend.............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Thank you, Paula! xx
Pandit Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Beautiful design my friend. Your creative prowess shines in this poem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:52 PM
I appreciate you, dear Vijay! :)
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