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A Beautiful Creation

Its no secret, Im a beautiful creation He is flawless and there is no exaggeration Just one kiss can be an addicting situation Together we can have beautiful relations Its been a while since we laughed, since we talked Since we've made love or that is what we thought But either way it was so passionate so soft He still on my mind, its been hard to get him off Does he understand this not a joke? Is he that afraid so he pretends he doesnt know?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/28/2016 7:37:00 PM
andria bereal, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:48:00 PM
Andria,, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andria. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2012 2:24:00 AM
A lovely poem written Andria! Welcom in PSoup, enjoy to meet other poets. - oxox love Anne-Lise (Norway)
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