A Beautiful Caress Ver 2

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Blue mist as the sun rises Restless spirits stir at the awakening Emotions traveling to their graves Another day where death dances Tombs wait, grey clouds obey Hovering over a dark autumn days Overcast skies as tears fall Funerals bring bouquets, never smiles Desires fly away in the night Eternity grips the coming coldness Angels whisper soft words of solace Timeless, torments fade away Home at long last

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Viv Wigley

Date: 11/14/2017 6:21:00 PM

A twilight into which we all will sail, Arthur. Fine write. Regards, viv

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/13/2017 12:19:00 PM

Im seeing it together now...Death never brings smiles..indeed so true..only the solace of Angels whispering from heaven console the heart.

Sara Ella

Date: 11/12/2017 4:51:00 PM

Well done Art - It is a dark poem but you know how to bring out the emotions <3

Tim Smith

Date: 11/12/2017 1:22:00 PM

Hold on to those last breaths...great follow up

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/12/2017 12:19:00 PM

love the intruiging language, gives me a good chill, arthur-home at last!.. huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2017 6:42:00 AM

Wow, the feeling of doom...the inevitable time of death is portrayed nicely within this write! This fear and interest of death encompasses many things, and you have so eloquently written about so many of them...within the darker grey, teary eyed, dim likeness of a sky falling down towards lifelessness...I equate the end towards this! What a perfect piece, Great Work my friend!!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/12/2017 5:37:00 AM

Excellent. Well said. Thanks for sharing it.