Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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A Beautiful Caress Ver 2

Blue mist as the sun rises
Restless spirits stir at the awakening
Emotions traveling to their graves
Another day where death dances
Tombs wait, grey clouds obey
Hovering over a dark autumn days

							Overcast skies as tears fall
Funerals bring bouquets, never smiles


Desires fly away in the night
	Eternity grips the coming coldness
		Angels whisper soft words of solace
			Timeless, torments fade away
				Home at long last

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Viv Wigley November 14, 2017 at 6:21 PM A twilight into which we all will sail, Arthur. Fine write. Regards, viv

Charmaine Chircop November 13, 2017 at 12:19 PM Im seeing it together now...Death never brings smiles..indeed so true..only the solace of Angels whispering from heaven console the heart.

Sara Ella November 12, 2017 at 4:51 PM Well done Art - It is a dark poem but you know how to bring out the emotions <3

Tim Smith November 12, 2017 at 1:22 PM Hold on to those last breaths...great follow up

Nette Onclaud November 12, 2017 at 12:19 PM love the intruiging language, gives me a good chill, arthur-home at last!.. huggs

Russell Sivey November 12, 2017 at 6:42 AM Wow, the feeling of doom...the inevitable time of death is portrayed nicely within this write! This fear and interest of death encompasses many things, and you have so eloquently written about so many of them...within the darker grey, teary eyed, dim likeness of a sky falling down towards lifelessness...I equate the end towards this! What a perfect piece, Great Work my friend!!

Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:37 AM Excellent. Well said. Thanks for sharing it.