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A Beauteous Sight - Iambic Pentameter

The desire within my heart it shall flow Like a river of Love into your soul The light of Love within my heart shall glow And I shall send it to its final goal Across the miles on ethereal plain I do send my light on the wings of Love And I shall be with you now once again When we have our dream in Heaven above My Love I feel the stirring of passion When my eyes behold A Beauteous Sight Tonight our Love may we never ration As we walk out into our dream of night. 11/01/2019.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/17/2019 6:18:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2019 1:01:00 PM

'The desire within my heart it shall flow Like a river of Love into your soul' these lines are captivating Mike and prove what a romantic soul you possess. Gorgeous! xxoo : )

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/17/2019 10:16:00 AM

Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Trying some shorter forms within my Valentine's collection. I am enjoying writing this collection. The love is still flowing. have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2019 7:39:00 PM

Yes, this a beauteious sight AND a beauteous write, my friend!

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 8:01:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this work, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am trying a few different forms, especially the shorter forms. The heart is still singing. My rose is still in full bloom. I shall return to these writes after my Valentine.s collection. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2019 11:40:00 AM

I agree with Vijay, great flow to this poem my friend. You write romance so well..

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 1:21:00 PM

Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. The heart always keeps singing my friend. I decided to try writing the romance in shorter forms, just too see how it would go. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2019 7:35:00 AM

Beautiful flow and rhythm to your words..a lovely poem of passion and romance, Mike.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 1:06:00 PM

Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Still trying shorter forms. Enjoying the process. I find the heart can sing just the same. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/11/2019 6:32:00 PM

Absolutely beautifully written. I love this. :)

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 7:41:00 PM

Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this write, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am just trying to see if I can write in the shorter forms. My rose is still singing its songs of love. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX