Justin Bordner Poet Free verse

A Beast Feast

Lean into me Luv,
abandon the logic of romance,
be naked in the nature of my need,
pant openly as weightlessness prickles your pink parts,

Tonight I do not want your love,
I don't deserve it anyway, a villian in exhuberance,
I just want the secrets of your sex, without plead,
to suck the salt of your secretion, feed on the spray of your darts,

Slaking my savagery with the skin of your submission,
unlocking the vault with nimble pick, to teach with a spanking stick,
having that naughty nook spilling a confession of capitulation, dizzy dilation,
an Angel of excess, I place your safety on a shelf of disarray, caution on delay,

I want to ravage the basement of your beauty, finding hot boxes of remission,
rummaging the attic of your aggressions with the precision of a magic trick,
I don't need you to be my nurse, a Nightengale of negligent rehabilitation,
I don't want the chill of charity, just the alarm of your domination in dismay,

Melt upon the mercy of my meat,
let me take the wet wisdom of your woman's weapon
smear it along the dagger of my undiagnosed demolition,
under a Blood Moon your body will flex without rest, hesitation does retreat,
I gently grip your throat, as I feel your moan in the soft palm of my hand's vindication -

J.A.B.

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Eileen Manassian September 19, 2014 at 11:19 PM Just to be taken.......a woman's sweetest fantasy. lovely. ...... no place for the chill of charity, Justin. Love your sensual writes the most. I get a glimpse of the passionate man that you are. awesome. Justin Bordner September 20, 2014 at 2:03 AM A man, bursting with savage desire...sometimes a woman just needs to be licked, bitten and totally taken Eileen...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker September 1, 2014 at 9:04 PM Superlative Justin, you and your gift of poetry! Verlena Justin Bordner September 2, 2014 at 8:55 PM I just need to ravage and devour the only beauty that can satisfy my hottest need...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2014 at 9:33 PM both lusty and creepy. GOOD one!!! Justin Bordner April 26, 2014 at 7:30 PM Yes Andrea, there is a gothic unrest in this commanding intimacy.Both give what they wish to, and take what they need. J.A.B.

Jay Loveless April 20, 2014 at 5:55 PM Ohmy, I feel the warmth creeping through my own parts. what a sinful spell you lay out before and and oh how delightful it sounds. Justin Bordner April 21, 2014 at 8:10 PM I love being a heat source for you. Appreciate the aggression with me. J.A.B.

Paul Callus April 19, 2014 at 4:23 PM Well, what can I say Justin! Seems like I am the only man to comment on this poem...the ladies have gathered like bees to honey :) Very strong sensual write. No love wasted here...// cu // paul Justin Bordner April 19, 2014 at 7:21 PM No love wasted indeed, as the lust has been tasted. A bee keeper's treasure harvested. Thanks for the visit Paul. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 17, 2014 at 4:44 PM all 4th lines except hte last stanza.. 1st and last one,. :D LOL.. :) I remeber E. L. james fifthy shades of Grey.. :) have your read it.. :) by your write Im put into such scene.. :)vivid imagery though lil vulgar but at some part it's sexy and cute... :D masochism and sadism ei? :D anyhow it's a captivating write,, --olive_eloi.. :) Justin Bordner April 18, 2014 at 1:44 AM Yeah Olive, sometimes my lust is vulgar, but always a delight. Very happy you noticed the sophisticated rhyming scheme in this composition, nice. I have not read the work of EL. JAMES, sounds tempting though. No s & m, necessarliy, just a lover's aggression. J.A.B.

Belly Bell April 16, 2014 at 4:03 AM sexy, hot, and pleasing. Belly Justin Bordner April 16, 2014 at 12:04 PM Very glad that you are pleased with my intensity Belly Bell. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A April 15, 2014 at 10:06 PM soup mail Justin Bordner April 16, 2014 at 12:01 PM Nice...

Poet Destroyer A April 15, 2014 at 2:40 PM WOW, Justin, a villian in exuberance, ready to feast a delicious, feast good enough, for anyone ready to savor drops of wet, that gleam the inner dinner platter. I'm gonna say, extremely tenderizing. No Nightgale, filling this poem. I guess, one can do without the sweetness for one night. He he, good loving can wait... Hold on to that rough ending.... :) Enjoyed so so much..... XOX~ Linda Justin Bordner April 15, 2014 at 9:47 PM I love how receptive you are to a Man's heated needs Linda. Sometimes a Man just needs to take the tender treat that he feels deserving of. Love can watch, as lust captures it's livelihood. Good advice my Sphinx! J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian April 15, 2014 at 1:59 AM You have portrayed the primal need for satiation and ecstasy so well here. I read this when you first posted it and was taken in by the play and interplay of words and imagery. I guess I was just too shy to be the first to post! HA HA! ;) I see some brave women here have given you the affirmation that it's a sensually sensational write. I join in... Justin Bordner April 15, 2014 at 9:40 PM Yes Eileen, do join the need to be taken by fevered hands. I glad your shyness have been overcome! Your compliments are very valuable, your erotic poetry is of the very best in the world, so having your excited praise is a prize. J.A.B. Eileen Manassian April 15, 2014 at 2:02 AM an Angel of excess, I place your safety on a shelf of disarray, caution on delay....my favorite line....a bit more subtle....yes clearly understood.

Laura Breidenthal April 13, 2014 at 5:57 PM Beautiful! Filled with awesome and interesting metaphor and daring, delicious detail. This is your distinct style and I love it! Always, Laura Justin Bordner April 13, 2014 at 8:28 PM You love the dark hunger, the psychology of pursuit. I love that you address the daring of this intense Art Laura. Thank you. J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2014 at 1:55 PM - Woooow ...... what can I say ...... woooow! - (Hot and nasty ? :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Justin Bordner April 13, 2014 at 8:24 PM Yes Anne, yes, hot targets, naughty needs, and selfish conquest. J.A.B.