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A Beast Feast

Lean into me Luv, abandon the logic of romance, be naked in the nature of my need, pant openly as weightlessness prickles your pink parts, Tonight I do not want your love, I don't deserve it anyway, a villian in exhuberance, I just want the secrets of your sex, without plead, to suck the salt of your secretion, feed on the spray of your darts, Slaking my savagery with the skin of your submission, unlocking the vault with nimble pick, to teach with a spanking stick, having that naughty nook spilling a confession of capitulation, dizzy dilation, an Angel of excess, I place your safety on a shelf of disarray, caution on delay, I want to ravage the basement of your beauty, finding hot boxes of remission, rummaging the attic of your aggressions with the precision of a magic trick, I don't need you to be my nurse, a Nightengale of negligent rehabilitation, I don't want the chill of charity, just the alarm of your domination in dismay, Melt upon the mercy of my meat, let me take the wet wisdom of your woman's weapon smear it along the dagger of my undiagnosed demolition, under a Blood Moon your body will flex without rest, hesitation does retreat, I gently grip your throat, as I feel your moan in the soft palm of my hand's vindication - J.A.B.

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Date: 9/19/2014 11:19:00 PM
Just to be taken.......a woman's sweetest fantasy. lovely. ...... no place for the chill of charity, Justin. Love your sensual writes the most. I get a glimpse of the passionate man that you are. awesome.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/20/2014 2:03:00 AM
A man, bursting with savage desire...sometimes a woman just needs to be licked, bitten and totally taken Eileen...J.A.B.
Date: 9/1/2014 9:04:00 PM
Superlative Justin, you and your gift of poetry! Verlena
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 8:55:00 PM
I just need to ravage and devour the only beauty that can satisfy my hottest need...J.A.B.
Date: 4/25/2014 9:33:00 PM
both lusty and creepy. GOOD one!!!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/26/2014 7:30:00 PM
Yes Andrea, there is a gothic unrest in this commanding intimacy.Both give what they wish to, and take what they need. J.A.B.
Date: 4/20/2014 5:55:00 PM
Ohmy, I feel the warmth creeping through my own parts. what a sinful spell you lay out before and and oh how delightful it sounds.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/21/2014 8:10:00 PM
I love being a heat source for you. Appreciate the aggression with me. J.A.B.
Date: 4/19/2014 4:23:00 PM
Well, what can I say Justin! Seems like I am the only man to comment on this poem...the ladies have gathered like bees to honey :) Very strong sensual write. No love wasted here...// cu // paul
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/19/2014 7:21:00 PM
No love wasted indeed, as the lust has been tasted. A bee keeper's treasure harvested. Thanks for the visit Paul. J.A.B.
Date: 4/17/2014 4:44:00 PM
all 4th lines except hte last stanza.. 1st and last one,. :D LOL.. :) I remeber E. L. james fifthy shades of Grey.. :) have your read it.. :) by your write Im put into such scene.. :)vivid imagery though lil vulgar but at some part it's sexy and cute... :D masochism and sadism ei? :D anyhow it's a captivating write,, --olive_eloi.. :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/18/2014 1:44:00 AM
Yeah Olive, sometimes my lust is vulgar, but always a delight. Very happy you noticed the sophisticated rhyming scheme in this composition, nice. I have not read the work of EL. JAMES, sounds tempting though. No s & m, necessarliy, just a lover's aggression. J.A.B.
Date: 4/16/2014 4:03:00 AM
sexy, hot, and pleasing. Belly
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/16/2014 12:04:00 PM
Very glad that you are pleased with my intensity Belly Bell. J.A.B.
Date: 4/15/2014 10:06:00 PM
soup mail
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/16/2014 12:01:00 PM
Nice...
Date: 4/15/2014 2:40:00 PM
WOW, Justin, a villian in exuberance, ready to feast a delicious, feast good enough, for anyone ready to savor drops of wet, that gleam the inner dinner platter. I'm gonna say, extremely tenderizing. No Nightgale, filling this poem. I guess, one can do without the sweetness for one night. He he, good loving can wait... Hold on to that rough ending.... :) Enjoyed so so much..... XOX~ Linda
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/15/2014 9:47:00 PM
I love how receptive you are to a Man's heated needs Linda. Sometimes a Man just needs to take the tender treat that he feels deserving of. Love can watch, as lust captures it's livelihood. Good advice my Sphinx! J.A.B.
Date: 4/15/2014 1:59:00 AM
You have portrayed the primal need for satiation and ecstasy so well here. I read this when you first posted it and was taken in by the play and interplay of words and imagery. I guess I was just too shy to be the first to post! HA HA! ;) I see some brave women here have given you the affirmation that it's a sensually sensational write. I join in...
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/15/2014 9:40:00 PM
Yes Eileen, do join the need to be taken by fevered hands. I glad your shyness have been overcome! Your compliments are very valuable, your erotic poetry is of the very best in the world, so having your excited praise is a prize. J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/15/2014 2:02:00 AM
an Angel of excess, I place your safety on a shelf of disarray, caution on delay....my favorite line....a bit more subtle....yes clearly understood.
Date: 4/13/2014 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful! Filled with awesome and interesting metaphor and daring, delicious detail. This is your distinct style and I love it! Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/13/2014 8:28:00 PM
You love the dark hunger, the psychology of pursuit. I love that you address the daring of this intense Art Laura. Thank you. J.A.B.
Date: 4/13/2014 1:55:00 PM
- Woooow ...... what can I say ...... woooow! - (Hot and nasty ? :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/13/2014 8:24:00 PM
Yes Anne, yes, hot targets, naughty needs, and selfish conquest. J.A.B.

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