Peter Lewis Holmes Poet Pantoum

A Bathroom Pantoum

Antonio a tenor's ring,
in the bathroom he would sing
Gilbert and Sullivan was his thing,
oft he'd sound this manly zing,
in the bathroom he would: sing!
all his music he would bring,
oft he'd sound; this manly zing!
the kitchen staff could hear him sing,
all his; music he would bring.
Gilbert and Sullivan was his thing?
the kitchen staff could. Hear him sing!
Antonio: a tenor's ring.

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Sara Kendrick March 20, 2015 at 5:43 AM Interesting thoughts penned..Pantoums are not that easy to write but you made it seamless..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Viv Wigley March 14, 2015 at 3:19 AM Reminds me of my late brother in the bathroom, singing his modified version of an Aria from La Traviata, I think- " Valenciaaaaaa! Stick your head between your legs and whistle up your Barcelonaaaa! Fa la lala la laaaaaaaa!" Great write, Peter. Regards, Viv

Jan Allison March 12, 2015 at 8:30 AM hope he was sailing his toy boat and singing HMS Pinafore lol - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx