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A Bathroom Pantoum

Antonio a tenor's ring, in the bathroom he would sing Gilbert and Sullivan was his thing, oft he'd sound this manly zing, in the bathroom he would: sing! all his music he would bring, oft he'd sound; this manly zing! the kitchen staff could hear him sing, all his; music he would bring. Gilbert and Sullivan was his thing? the kitchen staff could. Hear him sing! Antonio: a tenor's ring.

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Date: 3/20/2015 5:43:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned..Pantoums are not that easy to write but you made it seamless..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/14/2015 3:19:00 AM
Reminds me of my late brother in the bathroom, singing his modified version of an Aria from La Traviata, I think- " Valenciaaaaaa! Stick your head between your legs and whistle up your Barcelonaaaa! Fa la lala la laaaaaaaa!" Great write, Peter. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/12/2015 8:30:00 AM
hope he was sailing his toy boat and singing HMS Pinafore lol - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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