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Written -2nd June 2025

A Bar Singer

A bar singer asked for a request But all he got was "give it a rest" He said "I know that song" "Please all do sing along" In that moment he felt truly blessed. He started to sing and he got jeered His eyes then filled up in floods of tears So he ran out the door Was not seen any more Till he returned much older by years. Customers in the bar sat and stared “His singing's out of tune” they declared They all went from the room Left the singer in gloom His ego was severely impaired. He said to himself, “that’s it, no more I’ll ask if I can just sweep the floor” The manager said “yes” “You can clean up the mess But don’t sing when doing your chores.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 7/15/2025 4:09:00 PM
such a light-hearted and entertaining Limerick. I struggle writing Limericks. You inspire me to write one or two.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/15/2025 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Sara, I do like Limericks and look forward to reading yours… Beryl
Date: 6/7/2025 9:19:00 PM
Sure got a laugh out of this one, Beryl. Poor fellow: His shower nozzle probably sprayed him with ice-cold water when he tried singing in the shower! :) gw
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/8/2025 2:47:00 AM
It probably did, mine does that, I’m told I sing flat. Pleased you got a laugh Gershon… Beryl
Date: 6/4/2025 12:56:00 PM
LOL…love the end!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/4/2025 1:26:00 PM
Thank you Kim… Beryl
Date: 6/3/2025 12:19:00 PM
well, gosh darn. I feel terrible for that poor guy. Sing out loud and clear!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/3/2025 5:08:00 PM
I agree Lin, sing out loud however you sound, especially when no one else is around… Beryl
Date: 6/3/2025 5:23:00 AM
Love the humour. I have a carer who loves to sing but she's tone deaf.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/3/2025 5:28:00 AM
Thank you Victor. I love to sing too, but you wouldn’t wish to hear me, that’s the truth… Beryl
Date: 6/2/2025 11:32:00 PM
Haha. The last line was simply hilarious
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/3/2025 12:51:00 AM
Ah, thank you Andrea, lovely comment, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl
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