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A Park

Kids playing at the park Sometimes until it is dark Laughter around us Which is a must Warm breeze blowing Thank goodness it's not snowing The sun shining down Which makes happiness around Kind of relaxing to me And makes me happy A few shady spots In case it gets hot Lets go there everyday That the days are not gray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/11/2010 8:05:00 PM
I have nothing good to say about this. Its childish without being charming and its meaningless without having a metaphor.
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