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A 24-Hour a Day Commit

There's a lot of people that just don't get it Feel they're owed a living, other factors they omit They fail to see What life really means It's a twenty-four-hour full-time commit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/11/2018 8:12:00 AM
Very witty. Love it, Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/11/2018 12:32:00 PM
Learned that a long time ago!!! Thank you, sweetie... Happy Jack XOX
Date: 8/1/2018 12:39:00 PM
It won't come to them, they have to.get off their butts and get out there.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2018 12:53:00 PM
Certainly, world leaders missed class, must be been absent that day!!!
Date: 8/1/2018 9:08:00 AM
Oh that's good! Good morning my dear poet friend, kisses blown in your direction ~~~~<3
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:23:00 AM
LOL Got em... shootin' em back with a warm snuggly hug my love!!! WOW, What a way to start my day!!! Yummy yum yum yum!!! Lovesies, Happy Jack XOXOX

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