Reason A. Poteet Poet Limerick

A 180 On the Slopes

 limerick 

One day, jogging in snow, Jack met Jill
on his third try, he's almost up hill.
     This girl learning to ski
     rolled her foot, hit his knee
down they go, Jack 'n Jill, what a thrill!

revised April 21, 2018

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Susan Gentry April 25, 2018 at 6:22 AM Congratulations on your win.

Line Gauthier April 24, 2018 at 7:37 PM LOL so cute. Are the better ones on the bottom?

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2018 at 6:58 PM I remember this one and really liking it. Congrats for the win, Reason.

Gershon Wolf February 23, 2018 at 2:23 PM A merry romp, indeed. Lovely, light limerick! So enjoyable. :) Gershon Reason A. Poteet March 3, 2018 at 1:14 PM Still working on it thanks.

Janice Canerdy February 19, 2018 at 11:14 AM You paint a vivid picture, Reason! Janice Reason A. Poteet March 3, 2018 at 1:14 PM Thanks

Silent One February 19, 2018 at 8:33 AM Loved it!

Jack Horne February 18, 2018 at 12:57 PM LOL, good one!

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2018 at 8:01 PM Well done!! Limericks are not usually so hard but wow, I really struggled with this one!! Love what you came up with.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2018 at 8:10 AM - A great one :) - Best wishes in the contest - // Anne-Lise :) Reason A. Poteet February 17, 2018 at 10:43 AM Thanks sunshine glad for the read and good wishes

Mick Talbot February 17, 2018 at 12:49 AM Like it, good luck in the contest... Mick Reason A. Poteet February 17, 2018 at 10:44 AM Thanks, Mick, it may need some work yet. Appreciate the and reply.