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A 180 On the Slopes

limerick One day, jogging in snow, Jack met Jill on his third try, he's almost up hill. This girl learning to ski rolled her foot, hit his knee down they go, Jack 'n Jill, what a thrill! revised April 21, 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/25/2018 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/24/2018 7:37:00 PM

LOL so cute. Are the better ones on the bottom?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2018 6:58:00 PM

I remember this one and really liking it. Congrats for the win, Reason.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/23/2018 2:23:00 PM

A merry romp, indeed. Lovely, light limerick! So enjoyable. :) Gershon

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/3/2018 1:14:00 PM

Still working on it thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/19/2018 11:14:00 AM

You paint a vivid picture, Reason! Janice

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/3/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thanks

Silent One

Date: 2/19/2018 8:33:00 AM

Loved it!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/18/2018 12:57:00 PM

LOL, good one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2018 8:01:00 PM

Well done!! Limericks are not usually so hard but wow, I really struggled with this one!! Love what you came up with.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2018 8:10:00 AM

- A great one :) - Best wishes in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/17/2018 10:43:00 AM

Thanks sunshine glad for the read and good wishes

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/17/2018 12:49:00 AM

Like it, good luck in the contest... Mick

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/17/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thanks, Mick, it may need some work yet. Appreciate the and reply.