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' Worse Than Lonely '

There’s A Thousand Things Worse Than Lonely There’s A Hundred Things More, That Hurt There’s A Million – Murder – Moments And A Billion More Bubbles Bursts But, There’s Nothing Here To Tell And No Soul Here To See Yet, There’s A Thousand Things More Tragic Worse Than Being Lonely There’s A Thousand Things Worse Than Lonely A Hundred Hammers Can Hit The Heart There’s A Million Movies Watched Melancholy And A Billion Bacalls and Bogarts There’s A Thousand Things Worse Than Lonely A Hundred Hollers That Can’t Be Hushed There’s A Million – Messed-Up – Madnesses And A Billion More Backstabs To Brush There’s A Thousand Things Worse Than Lonely A Hundred Holes of UnHappiness There’s A Million – Merciless Moments Like A Billion Bags Of Bitterness There’s A Thousand Things Worse Than Lonely Hundreds Harmed, More Than I Am A Million – Misery Memories Buts Like A Billion – Bloody – Battering Rams Yes, There’s A Thousand Things Worse Than Lonely Under The Setting Sun… But When A Solitary Soul Misses Love … Well … I Can’t Think Of One …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/13/2016 9:31:00 AM
honestly... same. v nice poem!
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Date: 9/16/2009 1:30:00 PM
yike a twist for an ending you had me sold until you caved (tickle) great thoughts! Light & Love
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Date: 9/16/2009 1:30:00 AM
Nicely done drawing the reader to the conclusion that you have surmised. The alliteration is a good idea also. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/15/2009 6:12:00 PM
Hi lady, yes being loveless, is to lead a life without meaning, for we were made from love, and withou it, we are merely empty shells seeking what we are lost from; our inner selves. And nothing but love will fill that empty void. When we live from our minds only, we are a miserable creature! Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/15/2009 12:12:00 PM
Good poem! Gives one reason to pause and think about missing the One Who is Love! Miss Him and here is nothing worse I liked this very much Charlie
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Date: 9/15/2009 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us in your excellent poetry today MoonBee. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2009 2:03:00 AM
Loved the alliteration, nice work...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 7:23:00 PM
your style is marvelous! MoonBee!....and your last two-lines bring it home beautifully!...jimbo
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