~ What Then Could Be? ~ Part #4
~ This is a form of poetry called "Concrete" or form poetry or given another form name, it would be
or have
some of the characteristics as well of a form of poetry called, "Dirty Pretty: Where the words form a picture
pertaining to the main theme or idea or themes of the poem itself, thereby giving it a more encompassing
view or understanding for the reader. ~
~ There was a liberty bell representing freedom. A Key that represents the way to freedom. A man of hatred
representing hate itself. An exclamation mark, representing the main idea of the poem itself, and a bird of
peace carrying and an aeolian liberty in its beak! ~
~ In this poem, the man of hatred, placing himself above the needs of the world, and- an eternal peace and
love, trying-to-know liberty, in turn, sadly through his fear and envy, his growing distrust of God and man
blocks only himself and others from the key. Which has always been accepting through the example of Jesus
Christ in love fully its-part. The honest and spiritless truth-of-its hand, the true Achilles heal of man, living in
darkness through the rejection of God its bitter greed, and blind indifference of another's cry for freedom
love and peace. ~
~ So may your genuine movements of the heart secure for yourself, and for another always, a perfect
peace, leaving its joy with another and you, and may then your love for life, be as generous, allowing your
spirit to fly in freedom in grace. As you grow in faith and trust, to know her well, soaring higher and higher
moving in perfect harmony with her ... the world, God, forever inspired through this;- and living-eternally;-
free ... ~
~ Thank you for reading ... bless you ... ~
~ The reason that there are Hyphens "so many of them") is because I have a computer that speaks them
with a faster and slower and higher and lower pitch of voice, giving a certain kind of ebb-and-flow to the work
with a softer more fervent and realistic and consistent tone, when I use the hyphens and other punctuation in
the certain places that I do, when in telling it what to do. Allowing it to speak in even a moderate voice if I
choose. It sounds very free flowing when I hear it, and I can only hope that you will be able to here it in the
same way. Thank you for reading and God bless you ... ~
James ~
Copyright © James Long | Year Posted 2009
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