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The below write has a 'tounge in cheek' element to it.'
As a human' and in being aware.? I.' Or you.? In the great Out-there..yet not as great as the cosmos reaches.? Where Coal black winds slice frozen; on velocity's outer beaches.' Where Heats not just hot.? How can words tell.? Yet enough.!! Back to Earth.' For things thre are not (that swell?) I feel that much Could be improved.?? And its not just me such is often on The news.' And there are initiatives by orgs.? Is that now a Word? With economys like countries.! And workers in herds TV proclaims of the latest news.' In blasts and mutters and Of the insane views.?? Of some who want to live live free? It seems they have' ( dangerous tendancies.?) Like human Immunity and maskless living? eating organic as in past Millenia.' And even giving..! Accounts and views!! Of their Reasons to boot.' Well back to fixing the world up for i Am sure there's a route.!! There should be a worldwide assembely to make stratagies and plan.? What should be Done to benifit all hu-mans, and the planet..The environment.' It would be so grand.!! All is needed is money.?? A real heap Maybe medicine.?? Yet as allways a plan.?? Its a big job Yet it must be started.!! To fix the faults that we are all imparted We must get through..We just need more ( people like i am!! ) full of Ideas ?? Oh and really great virtues.!

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