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time sweeps away

inhale, the lovesick bursting sunshine rain every moment beats ceaseless warm feeling acoustic years passed like ascending vines yet fainted hued shadow peers through ripen binds inhale, redefines flourish aloft through as time sweeps away to first dawning light and gasp a sound waft 1/11/2024

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 2:38:00 AM

I must add my congratulations. Your poem is so smooth. You always write beautiful poems. Hugs.

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2024 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 1:21:00 PM

I enjoyed this introspective poem . I liked 'yet fainted hued shadow peers through ripen binds...." descriptive for sure. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 1/11/2024 11:16:00 AM

This is deep introspective writing my friend.. I hope you are ok..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2024 10:06:00 AM

What a creative write. So true, time goes by so fast/faster as we get older... I did enjoy reading this one... Have Blessed day writing away.......................

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/11/2024 12:55:00 AM

Oh, this is a very liberating and refreshing write that compels the readers to perceive life in a different philosophical way, where each moment longs to be cherished and embraced.How beautifully you've described the essence of that redefining inhale, that can cleanse our heartbeats and bless our journey..Time sweeps away and we should make an effort before it gets too late to catch that first dawning light.Wow, such mesmerizing wordplay throughout, dear Eve. I loved reading this, sending love ~