' Third Eye '

~*~ " escape from the nightmares of yesterdays ... uphold the sublime ... SOAR ... FLY ! " eyes were shut head in bow sitting in the rocking chair ... DUSK - murky ... vague ... nestled with woe and a twilight dew tears fell - as I sleep in my cradle's journey ~~~my CRIB of dreams now, I open my eyes, the eyes of my frolicsome mind I SPREAD my wings FLIP it as possibly as I can and vagabond over what is possible I FLEW ... SOARED ... MANOEUVRE ... and STRAYED ~~~ abscond from the immeasurable humanly problems flee from vast imperfections and life's stains and limits escape from the TRUTH that everything ends in the same END I went to nowhere and voyaged over the atmospheric umbrella of reality ~ I FLEW ... as I witnessed a new kingdom a door of spectral hues of iridescence emerged from nowhere I enter and amazed of what I see my jaws dropped and eyes in bulge pictures of gaiety visualized in clear images reflections of the HIGHEST GOOD followed enticing, alluring, enchanting no words came out this is a realm of my powerful IMAGINATION'S LIMITLESS a realm where there's perfection realm where there's love, peace and freedom realm of equality and just kingdom a new world where there is a HAPPY ENDING a world together with Cinderella,Snow White and Sleeping Beauty a world of FAIRY TALES a world sculpted by my "THIRD EYE" a world painted by my mind's "DYE". I want to live in this world~~~flew back in reality is now just a dream! ~*~ ============================================================ *-* jun-jun villanueva *-* " A POEM, PLEASE " contest

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Date: 9/3/2011 3:42:00 AM
A First Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 1:49:00 AM
jun-jun this is indeed a gem. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:26:00 PM
Jun, Great to see a top win in your corner, Congratulations on first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:06:00 AM
Lovely imagery, congratulations on your first place win. Well done Jun-jun. Lee
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:03:00 PM
What a wonderful journey this poem is, great stuff. Congrats on a well deserved first place win jun-jun!
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Date: 8/30/2011 5:56:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem!!!!Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!!----Lori
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:56:00 PM
wow, Jun-jun...magnificent poetry.....this is one you may want to enter in Debbie's contest too.!! It is worthy to win again!!
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:13:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your first place win with magnificent poetry luv.. honored to share first with u..
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:36:00 PM
Stunning jun-jun, absolutely love this!! Congratulations on your first place win ;)
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:31:00 PM
sublime, jun... all the cheers to you for the top win!. whoo, huggs!
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations Jun-Jun on your first place win this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Jun-jun. Outstanding write. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:52:00 AM
knockout jun-jun, congrats David
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Constance's "A Poem Please" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:31:00 PM
wow! some JUST... is better than was... does that make sense to you... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:54:00 PM
This was fun to read. Keep up the good work. Tony
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:32:00 PM
That is wonderful....returning to the reality a dream....A WINNER here...jun*2:)
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