' the Touch of a Virgin ... '

Her Touch Was Shyly-Light
Full of Purity, In His Sight
Her Touch Was Soft in Timidity
Almost Opposed To His Temerity

Almost As If She Were Afraid To Lay
Naked and Exposed, as Helpless-Prey
Untouched and Untutored In Torrid-Ways
His Eyes, Seemed To Say … It’s Ok …

So, The Touch of The Virgin, Did Fall
Her Fingertips, Fragile and Small
Upon Broad Shoulders and Over All
Gaining-Ground, with Each, Moist-Kiss-Call

 … On His Lips, His Eyes, All Over His Face
From Toes, To Thighs, and Back Up, To Waist
Around His Torso, Sent Shivers Up His Back
Covered Every Inch, of His Manly-Track …

In An Instant … It Was All Over
Beneath Blanket, She Was Now ... Lover
By Honeyed-Moon, They Did Glisten and Glow
After The First Touch of ... Virgin Snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/13/2009 12:08:00 AM
Beautiful and adrenalin charging,groin tearing write MoonBee,This poem really describes;the virgins clarion call.Off course thank U for your lovely comments,one of the best by any poet yet.Your lovely words like Wildebeest herds in droves they gently beckon,this poet here can smell you near,which means you're a lot to reckon.God Bless,PRINCE PS.You mentioned you were a long distance runner.Which distance and at what level?
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful making Love Story. One feels alive when reading this wonderful poem. Congratulations! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:02:00 AM
"Virgin Snow" WOW, nice word-play......:JP]
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Date: 11/11/2009 7:19:00 PM
Romantic and passionate, Whew! Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/11/2009 5:12:00 PM
Very passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:29:00 PM
Lovely poem,I love lover by honeyed-moon! love Simone
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:58:00 PM
Awesome write dear Moon Bee! A joy to read, Keep writing and I'll keep reading, smile. Have a wonderful day. Love Light Patty
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