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~ the Rain ~

Oh how I love the rain. "Tap-Pitter-pitter-tap", "tap-tap-tap-pitter" "pitter-pitter-tap" as my soul cries. Joyous, graceful, peaceful, soothing, refreshing, sustaining. Hope is this way, love is this way too feeding the tired soul washing away the pain. Amid the enchantment, as the dark clouds roll-by, lightning crashes off afar. As the thunder quakes, Hope, love, remain. The rain, God's sweet refrain. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author notes STOP, hey what's that sound... Follow the link, turn it up a bit and close your eyes..smiles. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6ZVpZqistk ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The words in this poem form an open vessel overflown in the rain. Thank you for reading.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/3/2010 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round James. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:30:00 PM
Beautiful in form and in word. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:57:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week.Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 8:41:00 PM
this was a beautiful and, no pun, refreshing poem. congratulations on the feature, it is apparent as to why it was chosen. kudos! madison :]
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Date: 5/16/2010 6:21:00 PM
Conqrats, this is very unique....Karla
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Date: 5/16/2010 12:23:00 PM
VERY FOND OF READING THIS ON THIS SUNDAY MORNING, WELL I'D LIKE TO FIRST OF ALL SAY, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:14:00 PM
The rain jazz on you tube is cool!!
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:04:00 PM
nicley penned, great shape!! sorry it took so long to comment!!
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:41:00 AM
Was blessed by the reading of your poetry. Keep writing. Sara
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