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The Oranges

Struggling with the pen and the blue notebook With the various words like the nook and took Said to me, my friend Nancy Why the words didn’t get the poetry Luckily, Silent, the common friend we met He rearranged the words and came the couplet "The big oranges in the cold evening I like them so much, they are my pink swing" Nancy and I looked with wonder With these words we tried a lot, Sir I got the "breezes" into the "blonde hair" Said Nancy but still no poetry there Silent smiled and said in a soft voice The poetry is not just an art of the word-choice If you want the rustles from the Beethoven breezes You have to get the big oranges in the boxes ____________________________________________ February 25, 2018 MAKE ME LAUGH - Up to 16 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert Haigh

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Date: 3/1/2018 6:02:00 PM
Hello Paborb, this is a great poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene ... Probir
Date: 2/26/2018 6:37:00 AM
- You and your friend Nancy ... did really great :) - Luck in the contest, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2018 6:42:00 AM
Thank you , Sunshine ...
Date: 2/26/2018 4:26:00 AM
So good to read just after a juicy orange with breakfast Probir. Silent really is the caped crusader for struggling wordsmiths. Such fun you ended up having with Nancy.
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Date: 2/26/2018 6:34:00 AM
Just tickling my fancy, Jean ... thank you ....
Date: 2/25/2018 9:53:00 PM
hahaha... I love this, I also like how you incorporated Silent One in your poem... luck in the contest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 2/25/2018 11:30:00 AM
A fun read..clever write!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2018 6:39:00 AM
Do you stay always online ? ... Thank you so much ...

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