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The Mermaid

Hearing sounds he understands my mermaid sings for he spoken lines in streams of time she floats the waves and dance the days all for he, just for he. Sea waters edge, and looking up she dives up to the sun but circles down to white wash sands to painful paths she see's to whitewash sands, he circles down to spoken lines of broken times he floats across the waves then hears the sea, and hears her song to sounds he understands echo sound once all around now echo across the sea, he hears and knows those spoken lines and broken times,she gone shes gone he hears the echo, he understands, because of he, shes gone, shes gone.

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Date: 1/17/2025 7:51:00 AM
Jacqueline, I too wrote a poem about a mermaid my poem is called "I Dreamt" if you want to check it out. I really like how you wrote this, a bit sad. But it's really very good. Charlie
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 1/17/2025 11:10:00 AM
Thanks Charles. Yes, will check out your poem. Have a great weekend. J

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