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starlet sun rises with hints distance scarlet blush shade pick-up scent of rain blooms sweeten hearing the humming of bees whilst still air before sleep rest upon earth breast waiting for incessant drops of trickling water 7/6/2020 Strand Completely New(6),Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Edward Ibeh invented poem form, Yalto: Line 1 to 15: 3,-4-2,-4-5-3-2-3-2-3-3-5-6-1-5 syllables.

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Date: 7/8/2020 1:10:00 PM
An endearing nature yalto of summer sensations, Eve. Love the GIF of the bee and flower too. Congrats on your win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/8/2020 12:33:00 PM
Love the time progression in your Yalto, Eve. This is such a wonderful form. We have Edward to thank. You have created a beautiful summer snapshot! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful summer poem and picture. I love your little bee. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Date: 7/8/2020 9:07:00 AM
Wow! What an excellent Yalto, Eve:-) Yeah, you've definitely got my form down to a science! Congratulations on your deserving win!
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Date: 7/8/2020 7:48:00 AM
Ahhh Eve what lovely piece! Congrats your top win!;)
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:51:00 AM
Such a tender colorful melody Eve. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/8/2020 3:01:00 AM
WONDERFUL PIECE! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/8/2020 2:42:00 AM
A splendid piece! I love how you have woven every line. Congratulations on a TOP WIN>>To my faves!!!
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Date: 7/6/2020 10:35:00 PM
This glorious Yalto is gorgeously penned Eve. Your imagery is fantastic.
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