Smile

Smile like the ray from the sunshine My how your lips taste like a fine wine I love your many funny lines Love you put me on cloud nine Edward you are all mine Date Written: 6/24/2021 Note: Acrostic Rhyme Bite Size Poem no.9 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/23/2021 11:21:00 AM

Edward seems like a guy who has a great sense of humor and loves his girl very dearly even if he is fictitious!! Cute poem :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/24/2021 8:11:00 AM

Thanks, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this fun Smile write. Yes, there is no Edward. Just a name I needed for this write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 8:37:00 PM

This is sweet, hope he liked it. Enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2021 8:59:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this smile write. There is no Edward. I needed the name for the write. Have a blessed day.....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2021 1:28:00 PM

How sweet this is for Edward!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2021 8:59:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this write. There is no Edward. I needed the name for the write. Have a blessed day.....................

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/26/2021 11:41:00 AM

Paula, What a nice smile. Put one on my face with this poem. -Richard

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2021 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this one. I love to put a smile on a face. Have a blessed day.....................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2021 3:19:00 AM

Nice one, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2021 9:43:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/25/2021 1:07:00 PM

A lovely smiling piece Paula, such a great acrostic to brighten our day. Blessings, Gordon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2021 9:42:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad this acrostic write brightened up your day. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Ann Foster

Date: 6/25/2021 12:48:00 PM

This is cute... I love it. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2021 9:28:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad you love this write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/25/2021 11:59:00 AM

Very romantic acrostic Paula, a smile lights up any room. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2021 9:27:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this romantic write. Yes you are so right, "a smile lights up any room." Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/24/2021 11:20:00 PM

Edward should be on Cloud 9 by now, Paula. What a treat to read! Wonderful! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2021 6:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Smile write. There is no Edward. I needed the name for the write. Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/24/2021 10:21:00 PM

Paula, Cool poems I liked how you fit all the lines together like a love bow. Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2021 6:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Smile write. Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/24/2021 9:09:00 PM

Liked first line found it inspiring. Worth practicing.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2021 6:50:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you this and found the first line inspiring. Have a blessed day/weekend........................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/24/2021 6:16:00 PM

Amazing how a smile can light up some ones world, nicely done, gl Paul. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2021 6:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, "a smile can light up some ones world." So everyone Smile. Have a blessed day/weekend........................