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Silence

moon dazzles alone stars blink mysteriously ~ hushed silence prevails October 17, 2020 Placed Fifth HI-KU Premiere Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 6:23:00 PM

lots of beautiful imagery,. Congrats on the win,

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2020 7:18:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Really appreciate.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/11/2020 7:43:00 PM

Congrats Malabika. I missed this contest LOVE.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/11/2020 1:31:00 PM

Such a beautiful picture all painted in 17 syllables. Well done Mala. I feel the serenity! Congratulations on your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2020 7:19:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Appreciate your kind words ~ Mala

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/9/2020 7:32:00 AM

I can feel the silence Malabika. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2020 7:20:00 PM

Thanks so much, Linda. Appreciate your kind words ~ Mala

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/9/2020 11:56:00 AM

Thanks, Linda. Appreciate your lovely words. hugs, Mala

Constance La France

Date: 11/9/2020 3:54:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your win in Brian's H I - K U contest with this excellent haiku _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/9/2020 11:55:00 AM

Thanks, Constance. Haiku is fun - although could be very deep!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 11/9/2020 1:02:00 AM

I love the beauty in the silence of the night. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/9/2020 11:54:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna. Appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2020 5:35:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Malabika:-) hugs jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/11/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Your lovely comments mean a lot. Hugs, Mala

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/22/2020 8:39:00 PM

Congratulations dear friend, Mala. This is such an enchanting piece!... maybe you don't know...I just love this..A FAVE..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2020 5:49:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Friend. I am falling in love with Haiku! A Fave! That's incredible! Love, Mala

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2020 8:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Malabika, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2020 5:48:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. Haiku is a great poetry form - so deep in so few words! Love, Mala

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2020 1:30:00 PM

Rereading this again from the winners' list. I sure like this one a lot. Congrats.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2020 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. So delighted to know you liked the haiku. I am falling in love with the form. Hugs, Mala

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2020 12:34:00 PM

Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your enchanting haiku!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2020 5:44:00 AM

Thank you, Tania. It was a great learning!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/22/2020 12:05:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your lovely haiku Mala. Hope you revel of the "hush" of your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/22/2020 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Yes, I am. Hugs, Mala

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2020 3:47:00 PM

soothing and pretty one!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2020 5:03:00 PM

beautifully descriptive:-) hugs jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/22/2020 9:14:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Appreciate your kind comment. Hugs, Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/18/2020 4:22:00 PM

Hello Mala, I love the dark sky with the full moon with the shinning stars. A beautiful sky to see. Enjoy your evening my friend.Love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/19/2020 4:55:00 PM

Hello Mala, you are so welcome. Yes we do have so much in common you and I.Enjoy your evening my friend. love and hugs Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2020 3:27:00 PM

Hi Darlene, Thank you so much. You always lift my spirits up by your encouraging words. We have so much in common. Have a great day, My Friend. Love and hugs, Mala

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/17/2020 8:13:00 PM

Ohhhh, so pretty, Mala! Love the "dazzling moon," and blinking stars. All the best in the "hush." Good luck in the contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 3:32:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. Appreciate your support. Looking forward to read yours. Love, Mala