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'' Release the Ocean ''

Healing fast and getting rust
Quickly living & turning to dust
Nothing compares to you just
believe me your truth is a must


Creeping plants know it's cost
How then here are you lost
Nothing compare to  mere rost(Ocean Tides)
believe me your pain is your host


Simple your life why you complicate
Dumping everywhere why you suffocate
Nothing compare to your lost fate
believe me your strength will fabricate


Holding on sometimes' hard
Once just "Release those Oceans"

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2021 4:07:00 AM

I believe this one is deeper and referring to the damage we are doing to this earth. I enjoyed reading it anyway. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/1/2019 9:13:00 AM

Holding on is so much more difficult than letting go. Right on! Or should I say "write" on?

Krishna Bhatta
Date: 12/1/2019 8:40:00 PM

your comment still a poem sir, mind-blowing and thank you for comment